Exit 9 Posted November 3, 2010 Share Posted November 3, 2010 I run a site for a fan club of the Hartford Colonials of the United Football League called "The Colonial Army". Therefore, I've been working on a logo for the club and wanted to get some feedback from the freaks that matter: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dogeshak Posted November 3, 2010 Share Posted November 3, 2010 They both look good, but the swords look fake or like toy swords that kids play with. They just seem to rounded, people might disagree but when I first saw them that was the first thing I saw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wILL-INI Posted November 3, 2010 Share Posted November 3, 2010 the "B" is awesome, the "A" has too much empty space around the H, I like the full one better. It looks really good! Great logo "Classic" does not mean it gets a free pass for being bad design.Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RuffDawg Posted November 3, 2010 Share Posted November 3, 2010 I definitely prefer B, and I didn't realize until dorshak mentioned it but he's right, the swords definitely do need a sharper point. There comes a point when you don't stand for the constant heartbreak anymore, and walk away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pianoknight Posted November 3, 2010 Share Posted November 3, 2010 MEPHISTO!I did a custom logo for a team at work with that font. 5th in NAT. TITLES | 2nd in CONF. TITLES | 5th in HEISMAN | 7th in DRAFTS | 8th in ALL-AMER | 7th in WINS | 4th in BOWLS | 1st in SELLOUTS | 1st GAMEDAY SIGN Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exit 9 Posted November 3, 2010 Author Share Posted November 3, 2010 That is exactly the feedback I needed, thank you very much. I sharpened up the points of the swords, made them a little bigger and put them at a greater angle. I also changed the font of the 'H' on concept A. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wILL-INI Posted November 3, 2010 Share Posted November 3, 2010 With the sharper points on the swords the handles look to rounded now. "Classic" does not mean it gets a free pass for being bad design.Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
taantumus Posted November 3, 2010 Share Posted November 3, 2010 I liked the toy swords! And now their outlines are too thin. But anyway, the 'H' in the A is now much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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