Point1 Posted July 4, 2011 Share Posted July 4, 2011 I've been lurking for a bit, but I think I'm ready to contribute finally.This is for an imaginary team. It sprouted from a random shape I created while listening to music and turned into this. It would be for a hockey team. The perspective of the lynx is loosely based on a picture I found online. I wanted the colours to feel electric, so I chose light blue.I understand the shape isn't very realistic, so I guess it could just be Wildcats or Ice Cats (or Ice Katz lol).C&C please, I really enjoy logo design and I think I have potential. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alphabet Man Posted July 4, 2011 Share Posted July 4, 2011 It's a nice start, I just feel it looks a tad too flat. It needs something, but I'm not sure what... maybe others have ideas... twitter.com/thebrainofMatt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drakonius26 Posted July 4, 2011 Share Posted July 4, 2011 This logo does have the potential, and while I do like the colors for a Halifax-based team, here's my issues with the logo.- Fix the shading of the jaw, more specifically the white and move the bottom of it out slightly more than what you have now.- Fix the upper row of teeth, more specifically the left fang which seems broken and slanted awkwardly. It needs to be curving downwards.- Fix how the whiskers align with each other, and this includes the light blue shading of the right side. It needs to be uniform in it's distance from whisker to whisker.- Fix the nose, it's way too droopy and big. It needs to be moved up a bit and a little more defined, since the left side comes down further than the right side.- Fix the eyes, I need to be able to differentiate between the angry brows you've given him and the eye itself. It appears a little shocked than it does aggressive.- Finally, fix the shading of the brow and head, take your time and make the dark blue trim and shading match with the actual head of the lynx more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CGL77 Posted July 4, 2011 Share Posted July 4, 2011 Job well done. This is really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkychewbarky Posted July 4, 2011 Share Posted July 4, 2011 It's pretty good.That 3/4 angle is a tough one to get right.Maybe work on the 'nose-upper lip- upper teeth' unit.It looks a tad 'pushed in'.By the way...Halifax would be an awesome place for an NHL franchise. *The Battle of Seattle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drdougfresh Posted July 4, 2011 Share Posted July 4, 2011 I think changing the upper row of teeth and the eye would make a WORLD of difference. Great start! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Point1 Posted July 4, 2011 Author Share Posted July 4, 2011 Wow, thanks for the comments. Before I update doesn anyone want to get in some last critiques? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Point1 Posted July 5, 2011 Author Share Posted July 5, 2011 Before I go forward (well, you can see signs of the update in progress), I'm wondering if I should go black or blue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fumbler Posted July 5, 2011 Share Posted July 5, 2011 Before I go forward (well, you can see signs of the update in progress), I'm wondering if I should go black or blue.I'd stay the original colours with a dark dark navy Blue / Black highlight.Good going tho Point1 for a first up. RICHMOND TIGERS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sparkychewbarky Posted July 5, 2011 Share Posted July 5, 2011 I agree with footy.Darken the original dark blue. *The Battle of Seattle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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