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Victoria Vandals Concept

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This is a concept I've been messing around with, temporarily named the Victoria Vandals, hence the spray can tertiary. Just looking for some C+C to see what I can improve.

Thanks guys!

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EDIT: NEW POST INCLUDING PRIMARY OPTIONS

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The overall logos are good, nice execution.

When I first saw the logo I thought it was a female. I don't know what you're intending this for, but with the "punk" element, I thought it might have been for a ladies roller derby team.

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Really nice job here. Fitting/unique color scheme. My only gripe is what I assume to be "V V" on the spray can. It looks like little arms to me. I thought you were trying to make the can a character. I would suggest putting the V's on the front (facing us) of the can instead of wrapping them around. The label is normally on the front with instructions on the back anyway.

Great job on this. Very unique.

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Really nice job here. Fitting/unique color scheme. My only gripe is what I assume to be "V V" on the spray can. It looks like little arms to me. I thought you were trying to make the can a character. I would suggest putting the V's on the front (facing us) of the can instead of wrapping them around. The label is normally on the front with instructions on the back anyway.

Great job on this. Very unique.

Yeah, the "baby arm spray can" was an issue I noticed myself, and part of why I posted it was to see people's immediate perception of that. Clearly I was right hahah, here's an updated version, hopefully correcting this issue. Any better?

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The one on the right looks better, but the red wordmark on the left could work if you reduced the red elsewhere in the logo. The red circle behind the head looks a little weird... it gives me a vibe like someone wearing one of those girly winter hats that and kinda... poofy.

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^^ Kinda like that ^^

The logo would probably look better either without the circle, or with it filled in with a different colour.

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