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  1. I'm going to offer some constructive suggestions for this thread that I honestly think apply to many threads in the Sports Fan Fiction forum. Given that 90% of the posts are your own narrative, I think there are some ways that you could restructure the way you run this to gain more of a following and improve generally. I think that what separates a lot of the really popular topics in this forum from the others is that they are heavily design-centric. I'm not really suggesting that this thread does not have a lot of designs, but I think that you should initiate the narrative by really developing (and explaining this process) the designs and logos in this production before just jumping into the narrative. From an outside perspective, a lot of the information in this thread is overloaded to the point that it would be difficult to track back to the beginning of the thread and follow. I think there are a few areas for improvement that could definitely help you with this issue. First, I would omit any irrelevant information. This is a sports forum, and I perceive most interest in these threads to be centered around scores, etc. I don't think that information on every single player is useful or relevant. Obviously some of the more popular threads include player information, but often after they have already gained somewhat of a following or have forefronted their thread with a lot of logo/design elements. I also think that there are some ways you could reshuffle how you present information. It's great that you can write in depth paragraphs, but I can't honestly see anyone going back through to read all of them. I would instead include somewhat more general overviews about trends/themes in the league, etc. (while also still including specific games and scores). The last thing that I really think would improve this thread would be to slow down. One way to mitigate the information overload is to develop things thoroughly and over time. Don't hear me as saying I really dislike your thread (which I don't), but I think there are some ways you could structure it to improve and make it more accessible to others.
  2. gswansea

    Creamer Concept World Cup 2018 - FINALS VOTING

    From the same person who submitted it though ... I honestly think that's fine, given how time-pressed a lot of people were.
  3. gswansea

    Creamer Concept World Cup 2018 - PLEASE SUBMIT

    I'm in. Thanks for restarting this.
  4. gswansea

    MLB Concept Rebranding: Nike Edition

    I'm fairly sure the baseball from the primary on Seattle is lifted from @raysox Mariners concept, so you should probably give credit (even if you were given permission, just to clear up confusion).
  5. gswansea

    San Francisco 49ers Concept Logo

    This is a good start. I think that most of the thin double lines could just be replaced with a think black or gold line. I also wonder if the double pickaxes could be styled into a football shape based on how you have rendered them.
  6. gswansea

    US Super League (CHAMPION CROWNED)

  7. gswansea

    Georgetown Logo Redesign

    I understand what you're saying, and I agree with most of it. The image looks pretty weird with only one tooth, so I'll try moving the two teeth closer together to make the angle closer to that of the eye.
  8. gswansea

    Georgetown Logo Redesign

    Is the second link you mention the embed quote link? I don't see a link that ends in .png or some other image endings.
  9. gswansea

    Georgetown Logo Redesign

    This was a quick Georgetown redesign I put together. I tried to combine their bulldog mascot with the classic G primary. C and C much appreciated
  10. gswansea

    Music City SC

    This is a solid identity. I think that removing the blue border on the "Music City text" and just having plain, navy text would improve the logo. I also think leaving the "SC" as just white text without a border would help. The jerseys are well done
  11. gswansea

    US Cricket League - Beltway and Chicago logos open!

    Do you want the font for PHILA changed or the font for the other words changed or both? I should be able to finish the logo today.
  12. gswansea

    US Cricket League - Beltway and Chicago logos open!

    I added PHILA to the digital version: <blockquote class="imgur-embed-pub" lang="en" data-id="a/DAYrY"><a href="//"></a></blockquote><script async src="//" charset="utf-8"></script> Also, if anyone knows how to embed an image from Imgur, that would be helpful.
  13. gswansea

    US Cricket League - Beltway and Chicago logos open!

    I drew this up quickly. I can digitalize it if there's interest:
  14. gswansea

    WFA Club Championship 2017 (Week 4 Scores)

    Finally got around to week 4: