Cola Posted August 2, 2009 Share Posted August 2, 2009 I'd honestly start over with this.For starters, it is giving off a sports feel rather than a business. I think you could introduce something a bit more subtle to roll with the Dracula theme. Or at least tone the head down...a lot. Hardly any detail at all would be nice...or just some kind of outline.The wordmark is bulky and a bit too hard to read...which isn't good when it comes to advertising a business. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAB Posted August 2, 2009 Share Posted August 2, 2009 The logo looks much, much better with just one color. I'm not too fond of the font choice, though. The U looks like a J and some other letters are hard to make out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted August 2, 2009 Share Posted August 2, 2009 -find a new font, look at companies like pepsi, they have a very simplistic font, this is overdesigned.-get rid of the small details, like the nose and the thin collar slashes-the bottom part of the collar would be better as a smooth curve rather than the more jagged look-the mouth still looks like buckteeth rather than a more gruesome look. The word I would use for what it should look like is "sneer".-perspective is still off Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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elliott Posted August 2, 2009 Share Posted August 2, 2009 Ok, now maybe put back the larger negative space section of the collar, and continue to work on the mouth, it still really bothers me. But this is going in the right direction I think. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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undead Posted August 2, 2009 Share Posted August 2, 2009 The last update is headed in the right direction. The mouth looks good but a little happy. A happy vampire may be good for a company, I don't know. Now if you can move the nose and eyes over the same way you did the mouth you could have a winner. The wordmark looks much easier to read now, too. Portfoliobobschultz6' class="bbc_url">@bobschultz6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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