kewp80 Posted December 8, 2014 Share Posted December 8, 2014 I think the W logo could be a little more simplified and brought together more. I don't like how the wings don't flow into the W like they do in the original. I think getting rid of the little black outline would help tremendously, maybe even getting rid of the little red parts of the inner wing and just use the outer part of the wing if you know what I mean. Also, where the wing comes into the top part of the W could use some cleaning and straightening.Can't wait to see the rest of the script to go along with that A though! Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted December 8, 2014 Author Share Posted December 8, 2014 Here are the 1st passes. More wordmark than script I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted December 8, 2014 Share Posted December 8, 2014 Not so sure about the dichotomy between the two fonts, but man the feather at the bottom is genius! Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted December 9, 2014 Author Share Posted December 9, 2014 Here are the 1st passes. More wordmark than script I guess.Not so sure about the dichotomy between the two fonts, but man the feather at the bottom is genius!Yeah I see what you're talking about. I'm going for an "old school Buffalo Sabres" feel. Maybe tilting the large letter? Or enlarging it more? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted December 9, 2014 Share Posted December 9, 2014 I think "Aberdeen" looks fine, but you could use a slight tilt in the W in "Wings" so you don't have that blank space between the W and I. Also, are you planning on separating the G and S? Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted December 9, 2014 Author Share Posted December 9, 2014 I think these turned out really cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted December 9, 2014 Author Share Posted December 9, 2014 And here is the updated W: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted December 9, 2014 Author Share Posted December 9, 2014 And an alternate uni: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted December 10, 2014 Author Share Posted December 10, 2014 This is the full set so far.Word-marks:Shoulder Patch:Alternate Jersey: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted December 10, 2014 Author Share Posted December 10, 2014 Primary Logo: Home and Away Uniforms:Secondary and Alternate Logos: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PackerFan98 Posted December 11, 2014 Share Posted December 11, 2014 Very nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted December 11, 2014 Share Posted December 11, 2014 I feel the jerseys could use the wing W (which the update looks great BTW) somewhere on them, but other than that this perfection. Great work sir! Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted February 20, 2015 Author Share Posted February 20, 2015 As another alternate possibility: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan33 Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 Love the Aberdeen wordmark! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garren Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 Threw together a couple of jerseys:And here are updates with silver:The one on the right reminds me too much of the Quad city mallards logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted February 25, 2015 Author Share Posted February 25, 2015 Threw together a couple of jerseys:And here are updates with silver:The one on the right reminds me too much of the Quad city mallards logoWell, because I was just marrying the Wing shape to a body, the pose just came out this way. Also, both being a game birds and prey birds it's no surprise that they would look similar when being flushed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted February 8, 2016 Author Share Posted February 8, 2016 Here is the whole set: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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