H11K Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 Here is a Gerald Green art type piece I have worked on recently. I am posting what I have so far to see if I can get any feedback on stuff to add, fix, or take out? Please leave some constructive criticism! Sorry for a non uniform related post but I don't know where else to ask for feedback on this.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordyhazy Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 It's good except He is a bit too blurry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reebokNFL Posted January 8, 2015 Share Posted January 8, 2015 take out the word center Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadojoker Posted January 8, 2015 Share Posted January 8, 2015 take out the word centerThis..good job nonetheless Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan33 Posted January 8, 2015 Share Posted January 8, 2015 Background looks great, I just wish the player was more prominent. He appears to be surrounded by light white haze at the moment but I'm sure that was by choice. Regardless, removing the "Center" will result in an improvement. Overall this looks very professional. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H11K Posted January 8, 2015 Author Share Posted January 8, 2015 Background looks great, I just wish the player was more prominent. He appears to be surrounded by light white haze at the moment but I'm sure that was by choice. Regardless, removing the "Center" will result in an improvement. Overall this looks very professional.Oh well, the "CENTER" is really the suns arena in the background…. So i don't know how I should get rid of that… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H11K Posted January 8, 2015 Author Share Posted January 8, 2015 I updated this piece so that it would look better as a wallpaper and made Gerald Green a little more prominent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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