Sharpir0 Posted July 9, 2016 Share Posted July 9, 2016 Hi Guys I'm working on a Skull and Dagger design currently. It's been a while since i've worked on something like this so was hoping to seek some feedback from the forum on areas that could be improved/developed. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SmackNCheese Posted July 9, 2016 Share Posted July 9, 2016 I'd definitely make the outline along the bottom of the skull thicker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted July 9, 2016 Share Posted July 9, 2016 the purple shadow on the bottom of the eye seems unnecessary and the shape of the actual skull seems off. other than that this is a super sweet logo. you have great talent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
worcat Posted July 9, 2016 Share Posted July 9, 2016 the black outline on the cheeks should be more rounded instead of pointed. the purple highlights on the two middle front teeth is unnecessary as well, the purple eye highlights are unnecessary. lose both of them please. Shouldn't half of the nose highlight be gold and not all purple? Can you replace the blue with white? replace the gold with blue? This would give me a better what to visualize this design and it makes more sense. With this idea, the light would be shown from the right side thus the blue (lighter) to purple (darker) effect. Otherwise, Bravo. Very nice design! Bleeding Blue since 1986 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yayay124yay Posted July 9, 2016 Share Posted July 9, 2016 Nice!Why don't you make it into a sports logo?I mean,that's the point of concepts. Go the Blue Jays!And New Zealand! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rsaline Posted July 9, 2016 Share Posted July 9, 2016 6 hours ago, Yayay124yay said: Nice!Why don't you make it into a sports logo?I mean,that's the point of concepts. Why can't it be a sports logo? slap it on a helmet then, bam! sports logo. It doesn't have to have a basketball in it to be considered sports-y. On a C&C note: I think the notches in the stroke around the knife could be a little larger. Right now they kind of get lost on colored background. Other than that, I love the shading and the color palette that you chose! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yayay124yay Posted July 9, 2016 Share Posted July 9, 2016 6 hours ago, rsaline said: Why can't it be a sports logo? slap it on a helmet then, bam! sports logo. It doesn't have to have a basketball in it to be considered sports-y. On a C&C note: I think the notches in the stroke around the knife could be a little larger. Right now they kind of get lost on colored background. Other than that, I love the shading and the color palette that you chose! Hmmmmm I guess your right Go the Blue Jays!And New Zealand! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sharpir0 Posted July 17, 2016 Author Share Posted July 17, 2016 Hi, Thanks to all those who commented. With your feedback in mind and my own issues with the original here is the latest update. Thanks for pointing out the issue with actual shape IIfhockey, not sure how I didn't see that until you pointed it out! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DTConcepts Posted July 18, 2016 Share Posted July 18, 2016 I love it. It's menacing, badass, and really good looking. I love the color scheme, too. "You ain't gonna learn what you don't wanna know..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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