pelicanfan Posted October 14, 2018 Share Posted October 14, 2018 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DoctaC Posted October 14, 2018 Share Posted October 14, 2018 This looks pretty good. One of the big things I'd do is get rid of the skyline, it's a little too busy right now. Also maybe the NOLA logos inside the arcs - putting them on top of the pelican is a little too contrasting for my taste, and I don't think it would look great in reality. Other than that it looks nice! The NAFA - North American Football Alliance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pelicanfan Posted October 14, 2018 Author Share Posted October 14, 2018 14 minutes ago, DoctaC said: This looks pretty good. One of the big things I'd do is get rid of the skyline, it's a little too busy right now. Also maybe the NOLA logos inside the arcs - putting them on top of the pelican is a little too contrasting for my taste, and I don't think it would look great in reality. Other than that it looks nice! Thank you! I appreciate the advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted October 15, 2018 Share Posted October 15, 2018 I agree about the skyline. I wonder if, instead of there being a pelican sublimated inside the arc, there was designs (like you have in the corners) sublimated across the outline of the court? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vtgco Posted October 16, 2018 Share Posted October 16, 2018 A definite improvement from your previous version. The Bird-de-Lys works great, and the wordmarks on the ends are better. The sublimated skyline looks better on just the one side. All around, a cleaner look. Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VAdesign Posted October 16, 2018 Share Posted October 16, 2018 I really like the detail on the corners and the NOLA logo with the trumpet is dope too! Amazing job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kodrinsky Posted October 16, 2018 Share Posted October 16, 2018 The overall design is nice. Anyway, the baseline wordmark is way too large; it will disappear beneath the hoop system. There's a 72" space between the baseline and the hoop on the 401990 Spalding Hoop Portable (which is the case for the Smothie King Center and the MSG, for example) and 42" of space for the 401980. The "Smothie King" logo is also placed in a zone of poor visibility and I do not think that the brand would be anywhere near to happiness. Other than that, keep the good work. Your queen is just a pawn with some fancy moves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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