Sidney Posted September 3, 2021 Author Share Posted September 3, 2021 Thanks for the critics, I'll try my best to improve everything that has been told. I was already redrawing the right ear because something was off to me, the fact that we've seen that make it an area to improve!. thanks! Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted September 4, 2021 Author Share Posted September 4, 2021 Here is an update - A new look on the far ear - I've redrawn the teeth area with a better perspective -I've improved the mouth area in order to correct the far side of the face - I've made the neck thinner 1 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted September 6, 2021 Share Posted September 6, 2021 On 9/3/2021 at 10:14 PM, Sidney said: Here is an update - A new look on the far ear - I've redrawn the teeth area with a better perspective -I've improved the mouth area in order to correct the far side of the face - I've made the neck thinner I like this a lot, but i think a couple of things are a tad off about it. I like the shape of the right ear, but rotating it a little bit more down and shortening it up a little might tuck it a tad more back, conveying a better sense of motion. The right eye and whiskers need to be rotated a bit down too, because rght now they're angled up if you were to look at the panther from head-on. Lastly, I like the idea of the thinner neck, but you're losing a bit of that forward motion the original had. I think that sacrifice is fine, but that's the trade-off anyways. I hope this is fine, but I straightened as much as I could out to describe what I mean. As you can see, the original sketch is very wonky in its perspective, but all the bones are there. Just rotating some stuff around and shortening up a few areas on the right, everything beings to point in the right direction. 1 Quote I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted September 6, 2021 Author Share Posted September 6, 2021 Hi @Htown1141 I understand every points you've said. I can't see the image....I got my graphic tablet back so I'll be able to make all the improvements. Thanks for helping fixing his logo, it's going I believe in the right direction Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted September 6, 2021 Author Share Posted September 6, 2021 Back at it... now it's easier to modify, now that I got my stuffs back! I'll correct/improve these parts and once done, I'll see about the neck. - Improved both ears - Changed both eyes & both whiskers - Pushed the nose on the right -Redrawn & change the perspective of the mouth area Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted September 6, 2021 Share Posted September 6, 2021 Oh my god I am so sorry! I love the new update and I like the reshaping of the right ear a lot, the panther feels much more threatening. Here's the fix I tried a hand at. Didn't redraw anything major, just rotated stuff around lol 2 Quote I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted September 6, 2021 Author Share Posted September 6, 2021 You did a good job! now that I'm watching my first version I see every mistake lool. 1 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted September 9, 2021 Author Share Posted September 9, 2021 Hi, I'm working on my LV Raiders presentation project and I thought about this new shield it's I think aesthetic and the logo has a better balance overall. 6 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Indigo Posted September 11, 2021 Share Posted September 11, 2021 On 9/8/2021 at 9:03 PM, Sidney said: Hi, I'm working on my LV Raiders presentation project and I thought about this new shield it's I think aesthetic and the logo has a better balance overall. I understand the gold inclusion, but it think you might be going a bit too far in that direction. The Saints kinda corner the NFL black & gold market, and the Steelers also use blacks & yellow. With the Raiders being so closely related—almost synonymous with silver & black (heck, the teams nick name is “The Silver And Black”), so I think the outline should be silver instead of gold. 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted September 11, 2021 Author Share Posted September 11, 2021 I was working on my numbers font, I had in mind the idea of the pirate ship. I've tried to implement movements in the font in order to get a dynamic result. This direction has been chose because whenever the ship is attacking they're showing their colors/waving flag. C&C are apprciate to improve the font. 3 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattharveysc Posted September 11, 2021 Share Posted September 11, 2021 Your Raiders logo looks great. I won't lie. Can I also ask, did you use mine as a reference? I see a lot of similarities? https://dribbble.com/shots/9711908-LAS-VEGAS-RAIDERS-Logo-Concept Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted September 11, 2021 Author Share Posted September 11, 2021 11 minutes ago, mattharveysc said: Your Raiders logo looks great. I won't lie. Can I also ask, did you use mine as a reference? I see a lot of similarities? https://dribbble.com/shots/9711908-LAS-VEGAS-RAIDERS-Logo-Concept @mattharveysc Hi thanks I appreciate. No I didn't, I usually check on the internet as much as possible when I start a project to see if my idea is already used/taken to avoid similarities. I feel like every Raiders concept are pretty close because we (ppl that made a project on this team) are not changing much etc. You feel like we got a lot of similitarities? for example here is what I've done as a sketch. Here is an other project for example that are similar to yours and I https://dribbble.com/shots/3989505-Oakland-Raiders-Shield Here are my sketches if you watch closely my character has the head a bit low to look like a kick off/charge. Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattharveysc Posted September 11, 2021 Share Posted September 11, 2021 23 minutes ago, Sidney said: @mattharveysc Hi thanks I appreciate. No I didn't, I usually check on the internet as much as possible when I start a project to see if my idea is already used/taken to avoid similarities. I feel like every Raiders concept are pretty close because we (ppl that made a project on this team) are not changing much etc. You feel like we got a lot of similitarities? for example here is what I've done as a sketch. Here is an other project for example that are similar to yours and I https://dribbble.com/shots/3989505-Oakland-Raiders-Shield Here are my sketches if you watch closely my character has the head a bit low to look like a kick off/charge. These look great too. I'm not mad or anything. I was only curious is all. Honestly, nice job! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted September 11, 2021 Author Share Posted September 11, 2021 I'm not mad neither. I do understand what you say. Yours looks good too. It's a popular brand and a lot of people tried And thanks again Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted September 11, 2021 Author Share Posted September 11, 2021 Here is the Carolina panthers logo vectorized, what you think? Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sky1324 Posted September 11, 2021 Share Posted September 11, 2021 The biggest problem I have with the logo is that the motion of the logo goes up instead of forward like the current one does. The silver outline isn't my favorite either, I'd make it blue or white. I think the top of the nose should follow the curve of the jaw a little better as well. Overall it's solid, can't say I'd prefer it over our current logo, but it's definitely good. 2 Quote the user formerly known as cdclt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted September 11, 2021 Author Share Posted September 11, 2021 Thanks for the feedback, I'll try few changement to bring that forward motion. 1 Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted September 11, 2021 Author Share Posted September 11, 2021 @QCS got back on the drawing board, is it any better ? when I was working on it I've understood what you was saying. Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sky1324 Posted September 11, 2021 Share Posted September 11, 2021 Definitely an improvement! I think H-Town mentioned this earlier in the thread, but the shape of the neck is bothering me. If you compare the line of motion from the original to your logo, you see a clear difference in the way your eye moves through the logo. Football logos, because they go on helmets, tend to use a very straight line - the motion moves clearly, usually from left to right, sometimes going up or down depending on the logo. None of them move as yours does - first up then to the right. If you drew a vertical line through the line of motion, it would never intersect itself (with one Rams-shaped exception). Your logo breaks that rule - the line of motion would be intersected by a vertical line. I understand why you've shaped the neck like this, but at that point it begins to work less and less as a football logo. Certainly not bad, but possibly more fitting for hockey than football. 1 Quote the user formerly known as cdclt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sidney Posted September 11, 2021 Author Share Posted September 11, 2021 Again @QCS thanks you for helping me with this design Here is an other update Quote My website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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