Phat Kid Posted February 17, 2005 Share Posted February 17, 2005 Well after hearing it looked alot like a tiki mask instead of a dragon I did some small adjustments and I want to know if it somewhat resembles a dragon now. Also which color scheme do you like better. Ok I did a new one and this time simplified it a little. I'm not sure but now it seems a little empty. Someone PLEASE give me some feedback on how to make this better. Thanks.PS Also I deleted my second concepts to put in the new ones.OLD LOGO:NEW LOGOS:A:B:C:D:Let me know what you think. And thanks for the feedback ahead of time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carter23 Posted February 17, 2005 Share Posted February 17, 2005 D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mac the Knife Posted February 17, 2005 Share Posted February 17, 2005 No offense, but they all suck (not that I could do better). None resemble a dragon, red or otherwise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phat Kid Posted February 17, 2005 Author Share Posted February 17, 2005 No offense, but they all suck (not that I could do better). None resemble a dragon, red or otherwise. Wow that hurt a lil. But thank you for the crit. It is the first real big negative I have heard so I guess no one is perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
creativelysain Posted February 17, 2005 Share Posted February 17, 2005 I wouldn't say they necessarily suck, because they are all interesting pieces of art, but, yeah, they don't really look much like a dragon. They look like they were discovered in Hawaii. Follow me on twitter @jrsainGo Heels Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phat Kid Posted February 17, 2005 Author Share Posted February 17, 2005 Is it the inside (Nose/eyes) parts that are making it look like a tiki type thing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
creativelysain Posted February 17, 2005 Share Posted February 17, 2005 The thing is, i don't really know where the eyes and nose are. I'ts a little too comlex for a logo. Try simplifying it, and work on getting the main facial features recognizable. Keep working at it though. Follow me on twitter @jrsainGo Heels Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JQK Posted February 17, 2005 Share Posted February 17, 2005 I really like the idea behind these logo.You just need some tweaking dude, and a little better execution, but i think your idea behind these logos are solid. Stay Tuned Sports Podcast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brauny1280 Posted February 17, 2005 Share Posted February 17, 2005 It looks more feline to me. the teeth look like whiskers. I agree with lightbluenc and JQK that they are very interesting to look at, but if a dragon is what you are going for, it just isn't happening for me.Does the dragon have to be a headon face? It may be easier to do more of a profile view. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phat Kid Posted February 17, 2005 Author Share Posted February 17, 2005 It looks more feline to me. the teeth look like whiskers. I agree with lightbluenc and JQK that they are very interesting to look at, but if a dragon is what you are going for, it just isn't happening for me.Does the dragon have to be a headon face? It may be easier to do more of a profile view. The way I want it yes. It is for a Hockey jersey that I am going to have made and since no one replied to my request I am trying very hard to do it myself. I don't know. I'll keep at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phat Kid Posted February 17, 2005 Author Share Posted February 17, 2005 Ok I think I figured it out. I want a sorta slanted shot of the head to look as though it has it's head down coming at you. So I am going to play with some angles and see what I can come up with and post a new one either today or tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phat Kid Posted February 18, 2005 Author Share Posted February 18, 2005 Check out the new logos above. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Korkie Posted February 18, 2005 Share Posted February 18, 2005 Reminds me more of a demon than a dragon. The logo feels like an early version of the San Francisco Demons logo from the XFL. "The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed."Dr. Kelso: My son is a big baseball fan. Not so much playing it, but more the designing and sewing of uniforms.Tyler: That's neat.Dr. Kelso: No, it's not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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