Chief. Posted December 29, 2005 Share Posted December 29, 2005 I'm making a pitbull logo for a guy I know (his fantasy team) and I need some critique, suggestions, and so on. If you have any suggestions to improve it, please share. Help from you guys is always appreciated.UPDATE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrosby Posted December 29, 2005 Share Posted December 29, 2005 i would say to try and make the teeth look a little meaner, and maybe making the snout more defined from the forehead.overall very gooddo you have a wordmark? https://twitter.com/OutOfThisWC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natsfan36 Posted December 29, 2005 Share Posted December 29, 2005 i think their teeth look more like fangs, than human teeth....TEETH - The American Pit Bull Terrier has a complete set of evenly spaced, white teeth meeting in a scissors bite. pitbull I just wanna do hoodrat things with my friends. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BavarianMW Posted December 29, 2005 Share Posted December 29, 2005 good start, i would agree on making the teeth meaner, and the head shape makes it look like a bull terrier, like the target dog if u would. but but the general design has some good potentialon the nose i would add a little more details with the countour, and the actuall nostrillA Bull terrier's head shape is a general slope, and the pitbulls head juts up at the eyesalso the pitbull's ears are generally small and pointy if not, they curve toward the top of the headjust some arrows and suggestions.hope this helps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Le Québécois Posted December 29, 2005 Share Posted December 29, 2005 I would make the eye smaller.... Le QUÉBÉCOIS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patriot54 Posted December 29, 2005 Share Posted December 29, 2005 Very nice logo, ChiefIf it was me, I would make the top of the eye match the curve of the forehead, or add an eyebrow to it.Also, the blue outline looks too thin to me, you could try making that thicker and add a bit of that blue to the eye.And, like someone already mentioned, it needs a nostril and the ear is too big. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief. Posted December 29, 2005 Author Share Posted December 29, 2005 Updated above. Thanks a lot to all who replied, it really helped. Any more suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natsfan36 Posted December 29, 2005 Share Posted December 29, 2005 a lot better......good job..... I just wanna do hoodrat things with my friends. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patriot54 Posted December 29, 2005 Share Posted December 29, 2005 Looks a lot better, but now the nose looks out of place. Imo, it was better with the bigger nose and the whisker spots right under it. You could try BavarianMW's suggestion about the nostril. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BCBoy Posted December 30, 2005 Share Posted December 30, 2005 Great update but you have to work on the nose now, because like Patriot said, it's out of place, I think if you enlarge it, that could help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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