BrianVlietDesign Posted July 16, 2006 Share Posted July 16, 2006 The name is based upon the "Pirates of the Caribbean" films. I got rid of the Megatooth identity because let's face it, it didn't really fit. So, give me your C&C on this. NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DomTheAthlete29 Posted July 16, 2006 Share Posted July 16, 2006 Nice, but not great, I would have liked to see red used more, or a different colors, beacuse you want to seperate your self from other pirate teams. Like Green, Gold, Black or Navy, Graphite, Black. Something different but not to different. Someone be a World Champ, please!Fantasy Football Keeper League.....PM me if you want to join!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted July 17, 2006 Author Share Posted July 17, 2006 Nice, but not great, I would have liked to see red used more, or a different colors, beacuse you want to seperate your self from other pirate teams. Like Green, Gold, Black or Navy, Graphite, Black. Something different but not to different. Actually, the team's alternates are going to be red. They will be released soon. NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DomTheAthlete29 Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 Great, red is a must.Dom Someone be a World Champ, please!Fantasy Football Keeper League.....PM me if you want to join!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rmered Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 All up, I like it, though I have a few nit picky type issues.Is it winking? Or have a black eye? Is this deliberate?One eye is smaller than the other.Also, is yellow regarded as a Dark/Home colour?I thought it was like White, an Away colour.And the font, I prefer the Pirate font you've used to do the headings than the font you've used for the Wordmark.The White jersey is very nice, and as Dom mentioned, I'd prefer Red for the Home.Red - the blood of angry menBlack - the dark of ages past Oh, and I've got a site.Footy Jumpers Dot Com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted July 17, 2006 Author Share Posted July 17, 2006 All up, I like it, though I have a few nit picky type issues.Is it winking? Or have a black eye? Is this deliberate?One eye is smaller than the other.Also, is yellow regarded as a Dark/Home colour?I thought it was like White, an Away colour.And the font, I prefer the Pirate font you've used to do the headings than the font you've used for the Wordmark.The White jersey is very nice, and as Dom mentioned, I'd prefer Red for the Home.Red - the blood of angry menBlack - the dark of ages past actually it was, the bigger part is supposed to be an eye patch, i forgot to add the string. NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rmered Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 Eye patch is a good idea. Oh, and I've got a site.Footy Jumpers Dot Com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 Add the string and make the yellow ones red--yellow & white would both be home or away--depending on the league. Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mike2sana Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 it reminds me a lot of the pittsburgh pirates also try to fix the sword on the alt. it looks like somethings wrong with it other thn that this is a pretty solid concept ATL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted July 18, 2006 Author Share Posted July 18, 2006 New version:Alternate coming soon NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steiny_ramone Posted July 18, 2006 Share Posted July 18, 2006 New version:Alternate coming soon These have potential, but there's a few things I fon't like:-The curve on the bottom of the jersey clashes with the diagonal stripes on the sleeves and the shape of the logo.-Ditch the white laces on the home. White doesn't appear a nywhere else on the home and doesn't really need to be there.-The name should be higher up on the back of the jersey.-The crossed hockey sticks are at avery unrealistic angle.-The bend in the sword is a little too exaggerated. facespace?http://www.myspace.com/seancalcottmusic http://www.myspace.com/forgottentoys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
33hooligan Posted July 19, 2006 Share Posted July 19, 2006 photobucketHere's my version wildwinger88. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DomTheAthlete29 Posted July 19, 2006 Share Posted July 19, 2006 photobucketHere's my version wildwinger88. nice looking, but where is the red? Someone be a World Champ, please!Fantasy Football Keeper League.....PM me if you want to join!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
33hooligan Posted July 19, 2006 Share Posted July 19, 2006 My WebpageHere's a couple with color added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steiny_ramone Posted July 20, 2006 Share Posted July 20, 2006 photobucketHere's my version wildwinger88. IMO the only real improvement here is the logo. The rest is more-or-less the same. facespace?http://www.myspace.com/seancalcottmusic http://www.myspace.com/forgottentoys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
33hooligan Posted July 20, 2006 Share Posted July 20, 2006 photobucketHere's my version wildwinger88. IMO the only real improvement here is the logo. The rest is more-or-less the same.Steiny, Is this something you have asked for or is this what wild winger is requesting? I'm confused about who is asking and what they are asking for.I am only cleaning up the version presented on this post, with a few suggested tweeks added. If you want something totally new in concept then that is not what was expressed in my opinion.Btw what doe's Imo mean...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DomTheAthlete29 Posted July 20, 2006 Share Posted July 20, 2006 no, if you look at the first comment from me, you could figure it out. Wildwinger asked for C&C, thats what I gave. Wild: Where is that fantasy hockey league at? Someone be a World Champ, please!Fantasy Football Keeper League.....PM me if you want to join!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
33hooligan Posted July 20, 2006 Share Posted July 20, 2006 Sorry Dom, I ment to ask Steiny that question. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted July 20, 2006 Author Share Posted July 20, 2006 photobucketHere's my version wildwinger88. pretty cool NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted July 20, 2006 Author Share Posted July 20, 2006 no, if you look at the first comment from me, you could figure it out. Wildwinger asked for C&C, thats what I gave. Wild: Where is that fantasy hockey league at? Here: http://www.ffzone.com/leagues/hockey/worldhockeya/index.php NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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