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I think this is a good start. I think that it would look and flow better if you didn't use complete sentences. For example for when he was born, maybe get rid of "he was". and he played his entire 18 year major league professional career with the New York Yankees. maybe just put "played entire 18 year career with the New York Yankees" or something to that effect, but this is a good start.

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"We" miss him? I don't. I never knew the guy or saw him play.

I think by "We" he means Yankee fans.

Probably #1 Yankees fans.

1 hour ago, ShutUpLutz! said:

and the drunken doodoobags jumping off the tops of SUV's/vans/RV's onto tables because, oh yeah, they are drunken drug abusing doodoobags

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"We" miss him? I don't. I never knew the guy or saw him play.

I think by "We" he means Yankee fans.

Probably #1 Yankees fans.

More likely, the owners of the bars he used to go to.

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