NewYorkYankees#1 Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 Here i created this and if people like it i will take request. C&C Please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eye Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 I think this is a good start. I think that it would look and flow better if you didn't use complete sentences. For example for when he was born, maybe get rid of "he was". and he played his entire 18 year major league professional career with the New York Yankees. maybe just put "played entire 18 year career with the New York Yankees" or something to that effect, but this is a good start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moser316 Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 So instead of posting a picture, you just went with the thousand words? Makes a lot of sense for a signature. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePonderer Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 Here i created this and if people like it i will take request. C&C Please. Not bad, but yeah too many sentences. It's too cluttered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NewYorkYankees#1 Posted August 2, 2006 Author Share Posted August 2, 2006 oh ok maybe i will have lease words but i can make you guys of anyone that is in the hall of fame. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePonderer Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 Sorry about sort of ruining the thread by posting this. But, NewYorkYankees#1 read your PMs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NewYorkYankees#1 Posted August 2, 2006 Author Share Posted August 2, 2006 I don't have a message Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThePonderer Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 I don't have a message now look Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NewYorkYankees#1 Posted August 2, 2006 Author Share Posted August 2, 2006 k i got it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SNBSlugger Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 Why not just quote the blurb on his Hall of Fame plaque? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyFriedRice Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 "We" miss him? I don't. I never knew the guy or saw him play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eye Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 "We" miss him? I don't. I never knew the guy or saw him play. I think by "We" he means Yankee fans. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DG_ThenNowForever Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 "We" miss him? I don't. I never knew the guy or saw him play. I think by "We" he means Yankee fans. Probably #1 Yankees fans. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted August 2, 2006 Share Posted August 2, 2006 "We" miss him? I don't. I never knew the guy or saw him play. I think by "We" he means Yankee fans. Probably #1 Yankees fans. More likely, the owners of the bars he used to go to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NewYorkYankees#1 Posted August 2, 2006 Author Share Posted August 2, 2006 yea it means the yankees fans but my granddad got to see him play and he got a homerun from Yogi Berra. If i can i will ask my dad and see if he could let me take pictures of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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