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I think this is a good start. I think that it would look and flow better if you didn't use complete sentences. For example for when he was born, maybe get rid of "he was". and he played his entire 18 year major league professional career with the New York Yankees. maybe just put "played entire 18 year career with the New York Yankees" or something to that effect, but this is a good start.

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