heernumurr Posted July 8, 2007 Share Posted July 8, 2007 this is a logo i've come up with to use as a signature and for any concepts i post in the future.can i get some C&C please as this is the first time i've posted something like this and i want to know if its anywhere near the kind of stuff other people post.i'll have to post a picture of myself for comparison, but im told its a very good likeness! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shumway Posted July 8, 2007 Share Posted July 8, 2007 I really like your 'self portrait', although it seems as though it's just kinda on top of the circles, rather than working with them. Perhaps adding somewhat of a body to yourself, and having that contained within the circles. Right now, it's just a disembodied head floating. Also, I'd work on making the lines within the portrait a bit more consistent as far as thickness. For the text, try typing on an arc, rather than distorting the letters. A good start - just keep working at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidson Posted July 8, 2007 Share Posted July 8, 2007 it must be tough to draw such an eaccurate depiction of yourself if you dont have any eyes!seriously tho, there is a lot of unused space, the line width differa little too much for mine and could possibly all be a bit smoother, and i might not use the colour on the face, just leave white. otherwise not bad start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heernumurr Posted July 8, 2007 Author Share Posted July 8, 2007 tried some of what you said and this is what ive got:- firstly, ive changed the portrait so its a little less rough.- the width of the black lines was off, so after trying different things i got rid of them, and i think that and the new portrait has made it look a lot smoother like you suggested.- also decided not to overlap the head with the circle, and i think thats helped the "floating head" syndrome!only thing i couldnt try was the writing. dont have illustrator so i'll have to write it normally then cut and paste the individual letters into a curve.thanks for the good advice, i personally think its ten times better now with the changes that were suggested. further C&C would be much appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted July 8, 2007 Share Posted July 8, 2007 the second one is definitely better than the first. I like the color. Maybe try taking the head out of the circle and using it just with a wordmark? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heernumurr Posted July 8, 2007 Author Share Posted July 8, 2007 the second one is definitely better than the first. I like the color. Maybe try taking the head out of the circle and using it just with a wordmark?thats the first thing i tried but it was a bit awkward looking. i will give it another try though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidson Posted July 8, 2007 Share Posted July 8, 2007 hey i like that. i dont think you need that circle at all.reminds me of somethings i did a while back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heernumurr Posted July 8, 2007 Author Share Posted July 8, 2007 think youre probably right about the circle, plus i'll mainly be using it as a watermark for concepts so i'll probably just use the hairy face! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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