SirHooligan Posted December 31, 2008 Share Posted December 31, 2008 I'm a long way from reaching the level that most of you are so bare with me.Made a few concept logo's for two soccer teams......Miami Haiti International SCPanama City Beach Breakers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scottysprings Posted December 31, 2008 Share Posted December 31, 2008 I think if you eliminated the shadow & highlight effects and generic fonts from these a few of 'em would actually look pretty nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TC Posted December 31, 2008 Share Posted December 31, 2008 Agree with scottysprings, I don't know of any teams that use Arial. I like where you are going with these, just don't make them look 3D. 1/27/09- It was me, and I am sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firefly Posted December 31, 2008 Share Posted December 31, 2008 Yep, good logos don't need embossing. Heck, they don't even really need color. If something can look great flat and black & white, it'll look great no matter where you see it.The first Breaker's one has potential. The elements need to become more cohesive. Right now the the waves, ball, and sun seem unrelated to one another. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted December 31, 2008 Share Posted December 31, 2008 These are not that bad. Like the suggestions before me, don't bevel everything, use different fonts, and you will be on your way. I don't know a lot about soccer, but these will look better with more exciting fonts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shmee Posted December 31, 2008 Share Posted December 31, 2008 Miami Haiti: Much too busy. With the two seals on top of the shield plus three lines of text, there's too much going on. I'd try to come up with one cohesive identity that brings everything together. Less text, lose the bevels, and try to come up with something that brings the two seals, the fleur de lis, and the shield together, rather than doing what you have now where they all compete with one another.Panama City: Much better than the first one, but again lose the beveling effects. I like the last one best, with the 3-letter logo that you put together. I'd work to clean everything up, take out the photoshop effects, and simplify.Soccer crests can be very hard to put together, as they often contain a lot of significant imagery or text in a small space. Work to simplify, clean things up, and you'll be well on your way. The world's foremost practitioners of professional tag-team wrestling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
O_Town_Clown Posted December 31, 2008 Share Posted December 31, 2008 Miami Haiti: Much too busy. With the two seals on top of the shield plus three lines of text, there's too much going on.I agree with this. Try to imagine that logo embroidered on a shirt. Now try to imagine seeing it from a distance.I definitely think you are on the right track trying to come up with a traditional soccer crest, you just need to lose or stylize some elements to simplify it. Sig by TalktoChuck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ben7 Posted January 8, 2009 Share Posted January 8, 2009 as for the Miami/Haiti one.You could just use the common things in both seals > the palm, blue, white and the 2 places Miami Haiti (both have 5 letters) in some form.--H----A--MIAMI--T----I--I really like the 3 first Panama City Beach Breakers designsfor the 1st and the 3rd you could "simplyfy" the wording, like it is in the 2nd one for a clearer reading.Not bad stuff, good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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