Conrad. Posted May 14, 2009 Author Share Posted May 14, 2009 thanks once more for the great response to this...i think ive made a final decision on the logo (see top left of web pages) also, what seems odd about the icons? please let me know any thoughts about the web drafts, and thanks again for sticking with me on this whole process...*each crop would come into full color on mouse-over*with the logo i ended up fixing the jawline and keeping the head attached to the C....good ideas?*clickable words for each piece of content Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
afarough Posted May 14, 2009 Share Posted May 14, 2009 thanks for the crit guys...here's draft 2 with some color and versions of things you mentioned (thicker C, color, separation, highlights)what say you of these?also, good call steve, i think i'll try a more calligraphic C for the next set of draftsThat third one looks like it would even make a pretty unique and good looking sports team logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted May 14, 2009 Share Posted May 14, 2009 The jawline looks a lot better now. I really like where you went with from your first draft.As for the icons, well, I dunno. It just feels like your logo and site have a lot of curves, but the icons have all strait lines. Their not bad, and I like the idea of them. I just don't like all the strait lines in them. Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conrad. Posted May 19, 2009 Author Share Posted May 19, 2009 again, thank you gentleman...ive finished and put up a teaser page online where you can d/l a pdf of a good percentage of my portfolio work.CONRADBURRY.COMany C&C on the site and/or pdf would be greatly appreciated. thanks again.also, kewp, i'll take another look at those icons and maybe make some more rounded ones. Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted May 19, 2009 Share Posted May 19, 2009 Great job with it, very professional looking. The logo looks good too. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conrad. Posted May 23, 2009 Author Share Posted May 23, 2009 HOMEPAGE COMPnone of the links work, but what do you think of that for a home page? i want to force you to interact with the nav buttons and see where they take you...also, i edited the icons a bit to be more rounded (better kewp?) also, for the experimental part of it, should i have the tooltips working so you can what page you are going to? or should i only have the icon you click on...thanks for any guidance gentleman. Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chestnutz Posted May 23, 2009 Share Posted May 23, 2009 Not feeling the homepage. It's just wayyyy too empty. Maybe put all of the navigation items in the center of the homepage, like a checkerboard kind of thing. erikas | go birds | dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conrad. Posted May 24, 2009 Author Share Posted May 24, 2009 yeah, i think im going to put my 3 most recent projects in the blank area there...and just keep that updated as i work on things. Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conrad. Posted May 24, 2009 Author Share Posted May 24, 2009 yeah, i think im going to put my 3 most recent projects in the blank area there...and just keep that updated as i work on things.-bump- i did what i quoted:LINKAGEagain, the links don't work yet, but what do you think of this approach? better? Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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