CreamSoda Posted December 3, 2009 Share Posted December 3, 2009 This is a concept I am working on for a soccer club,C&C please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted December 3, 2009 Share Posted December 3, 2009 I like the unique shield idea, but the lion needs to be much, much more pronounced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted December 3, 2009 Share Posted December 3, 2009 the lion has no detail to it. I agree that it is good to keep things simple sometimes but this is just waaay to simple and the lines are too thin on the lion. he should be the focal pt and he seems like an after thought to the shield. also once you get detail in there, you might want to make him meaner, he looks happy here DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted December 3, 2009 Author Share Posted December 3, 2009 Thank you for the comments, I will try to make the puma stand out more. I was going for a very simple mark, but agr ee that it needs to stand out more now that I see it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidson Posted December 3, 2009 Share Posted December 3, 2009 i like the idea, but at the moment it feels like a line drawing or a sketch. however i reckon you could use less 'ink', so to speak, and still hint at a mountain lion.i particularly like the negative space on the far eye. thats really nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buster Posted December 3, 2009 Share Posted December 3, 2009 I think you need to spell out "Mountain Lions". The abbreviation is intended for actual mountains and to be used mainly on maps.Use a font of the same height but is condensed and "skinnier". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted December 3, 2009 Author Share Posted December 3, 2009 i like the idea, but at the moment it feels like a line drawing or a sketch. however i reckon you could use less 'ink', so to speak, and still hint at a mountain lion.i particularly like the negative space on the far eye. thats really nice.Thank you for the comment on the far eye!How do you recommend this less 'ink' idea? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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