Windmill360 Posted October 8, 2010 Share Posted October 8, 2010 Used one of their recent wordmarks and tried to keep the colors the same. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
north dakota Posted October 8, 2010 Share Posted October 8, 2010 I think this logo needs some improvement. I would get rid of the hump on his back and it might make it look better. Woah! You think I'm Cody? My name is Carl Scott Simone and we just happen to share a birthday. BIG DEAL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
taantumus Posted October 8, 2010 Share Posted October 8, 2010 Well it's certainly better than the retarded looking cat they have now. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted October 8, 2010 Share Posted October 8, 2010 Very good start, for sure. Some things I would give attention to:- the back hump is a bit excessive- the tail could use some touching up and smoothing out- the spot pattern could be a little less predictable and copy/paste-ish- while i like attention on the nails, they too seem to be excessiveOverall, I do like it so far- just maybe for another team? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DancinFool Posted October 8, 2010 Share Posted October 8, 2010 I love it, except for two things:-The claws seem to be too extended. I dunno if that's part of the jaguar's anatomy to have such protruding claws, but if it is, it's still a little too much.-The spot pattern is bugging me for some reason.Other than that, hats off sir. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CurrDawg Posted October 9, 2010 Share Posted October 9, 2010 Something about the long skinny hind legs, small ears, more profound upper body and the curled up tail make this look more like a monkey than a jaguar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiohead Posted October 9, 2010 Share Posted October 9, 2010 Overall a good job. Maybe some tweaking to make it look more like a beast and less like a reptile...some of the comments listed above about the nails would help as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted October 9, 2010 Share Posted October 9, 2010 overall it's ok. some of the outlines seems a little jagged, but if your trying to go with a new look for the jags, this is way too similar to the full body jaguar logo they have already. plus i think a head logo would look better on a helmet than a whole body. but that said, it has two glaring things that i think need fixed:1. the claws. they are way to big and dont look like cat-claws in any way. more like a mutant cat2. the head seems slightly two small and it might help if the ears pointed up out of the head.it has a nice physic for the most part and is intimidating. it's a good start and just needs smaller claws in my mind. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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