Blitz Posted April 14, 2011 Share Posted April 14, 2011 Okay, so removed the bevelling from the leaf, also tried to tone down the "eye-shine", however I dont really see much of a difference there.ORIGINALREVISEDThoughts? C&C more than welcome as always! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Somppi Posted April 14, 2011 Share Posted April 14, 2011 Looks fantastic, I love it. Auburn University Alum Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jared222 Posted April 14, 2011 Share Posted April 14, 2011 As someone who recently tackled this logo I know how hard it can be messing with a classic and loved logo. I think you have some good ideas here love the touch of white on the beak , but there is a lot going on and not much breathing room between the shapes. What makes the original Jays logo so great is that the negative white space acts as part of the logo. On a good track for sure , but try simplifying the ideas and shapes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
missouri tigers Posted April 14, 2011 Share Posted April 14, 2011 Nice job. the only thing i can think that might make this concept better, is to Just leave the maple leaf plain red. It's not a big deal though, I just think i would bring more focus to the bluejay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted April 14, 2011 Share Posted April 14, 2011 Nice job. the only thing i can think that might make this concept better, is to Just leave the maple leaf plain red. It's not a big deal though, I just think i would bring more focus to the bluejay.Agreed. Because, even though the leaf looks great beveled, it's unnecessary. Otherwise, nice job! NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ink Posted April 14, 2011 Share Posted April 14, 2011 Nice job. the only thing i can think that might make this concept better, is to Just leave the maple leaf plain red. It's not a big deal though, I just think i would bring more focus to the bluejay.Agreed. Because, even though the leaf looks great beveled, it's unnecessary. Otherwise, nice job!yep agree completely Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BaltimoreNewYorkGirl Posted April 14, 2011 Share Posted April 14, 2011 one of the best Jays concepts Ive ever seen. only complaints is make the Maple leaf a little less noticeable. but dont remove all together. smooth some lines. mostly around the beak. and other than that. its perfect. Im Abby.. nice to meet youGo Os. Capitals. Mets. Ravens. Rangers. Knicks. Butler Bulldogs. Maryland. Kevin Harvick.I hate the YANKEESS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted April 14, 2011 Share Posted April 14, 2011 Pretty sweet update! Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021 St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL) 2023 Champions Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gatek99 Posted April 14, 2011 Share Posted April 14, 2011 awww it looks so cute with that little sparkle in the eye! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnrafael Posted April 14, 2011 Share Posted April 14, 2011 My Girlfriend could say:"- OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWNNNNNNNNNNNN... Sooooooooooooo Cute... Johnny, It´s Hockey?-No Hunny, It's Baseball.-Horrible. But the bird is soooo Cute."My Girlfriend Hates Baseball.But the concept is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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