missouri tigers Posted October 26, 2011 Share Posted October 26, 2011 This is just something I've been working on the past couple of days, and I'd like to get some C&C on it.I'd love to here your thoughts on it. Fire away... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted October 26, 2011 Share Posted October 26, 2011 great except for the eye. currently it looks dead. im not the best with eye detail, but look at some of Fraser Davidons and Joe Bosacks logos, see how they do it. cant tell if you're using black or navy blue, but a little bit lighter blue or green would look great GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigBubba Posted October 26, 2011 Share Posted October 26, 2011 This is the kind of logo that would make a great secondary/alternate logo, but wouldn't fit the bill () for a primary logo. Try to imagine this on the front of a jersey - it would look odd. That's not to take away from this logo, it's a great design. I just recommend adding a bit more to it for it to be primary-logo-worthy. For example: a body, maybe put it on something (like how some logos are on baseballs or maple leaves), even trying to change the perspective a bit, etc...Look at the Quad City Mallards - their secondary/tertiary/alternate logos are all things like heads, flippers, etc... (much like yours). But their main logo includes the full duck. This would be an amazing alternate logo, but would need more to be the main one. Nobody cares about your humungous-big signature. PotD: 29/1/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
texfischer Posted October 26, 2011 Share Posted October 26, 2011 The eye needs some life to it, and maybe some anger. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
missouri tigers Posted October 26, 2011 Author Share Posted October 26, 2011 I'll definitely do something about the eyes when I make the first set of revisions.___________________________________@BigBubbaIt's not really inteded to be a primary logo, just something I sketched up real quick, and wanted to see how it transfered into a vector logo.I totally see what you mean though. This logo was going to be a part of set of logos possibly including a full-body logo and wordmark, and maybe I'll add those later but for right now, this is what I have. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DomTheAthlete29 Posted October 26, 2011 Share Posted October 26, 2011 Once again creating great stuff. If the sim baseball league takes off on this board I would totally use this logo. Can't wait to see how it turns out. Someone be a World Champ, please!Fantasy Football Keeper League.....PM me if you want to join!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
undead Posted October 26, 2011 Share Posted October 26, 2011 Really nice. The line weights are very appropriate for this logo. Colors work well together. As was said, the eye needs some work. My other suggestion would be for you to simplify some of the zig-zag lines, specifically on the cheek and the top of the beak. You could turn a pretty darn good logo into something iconic.Great job on this! Portfoliobobschultz6' class="bbc_url">@bobschultz6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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