The Imperfect Posted February 2, 2012 Share Posted February 2, 2012 Need some opinions on a logo I am creating... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CS85 Posted February 2, 2012 Share Posted February 2, 2012 Looks sweet but that "Y" bothers the hell out of me. Quote "You are nothing more than a small cancer on this message board. You are not entertaining, you are a complete joke." twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aci Posted February 2, 2012 Share Posted February 2, 2012 I'd pick 'C' as well, but the 'Society' in general is a bit hard to read. Maybe that's what you were going for, though? Hamilton Eagles- 2012 and 2013 Continental Hockey League Champions! 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 & 2015 CHL East Division Champions! Niagara Dragoons- 2012 United League and CCSLC World Series Champions! 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2015 UL Robinson Division Champions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
54Chevy Posted February 2, 2012 Share Posted February 2, 2012 your kerning is all over the place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanB06 Posted February 2, 2012 Share Posted February 2, 2012 I like the eyeball in the negative space between the interlocking "S"es. I also like the framing of Option C.I hate the rest of it. I think it's the font, but there's something about it I just don't like.And not to be totally insane, but why would a "secret society" need a logo in the first place? It's secret! *ducks* Sodboy13 said: As you watch more basketball, you will learn to appreciate the difference between "defense" and "couldn't find the rim with a pair of bloodhounds and a Garmin." meet the new page, not the same as the old page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Imperfect Posted February 2, 2012 Author Share Posted February 2, 2012 your kerning is all over the place.if i could tell you what kerning is, then id be concerned lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
54Chevy Posted February 2, 2012 Share Posted February 2, 2012 your kerning is all over the place.if i could tell you what kerning is, then id be concerned lolkerning is the spacing between letters. for example, lets look at your option A. move back from your screen, see how it reads SE CRET? tighten the gap between the SE and CRET. the lack of stem on the R is visually creating a gap as well. for SOCIETY, the S is floating too far to the left, and the tightness between I & E almost makes the I look non-existant. same issue with the Y as the R. with some slight modifications, your mark will be greatly improved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AJM Posted February 8, 2012 Share Posted February 8, 2012 your kerning is all over the place.if i could tell you what kerning is, then id be concerned lolkerning is the spacing between letters. for example, lets look at your option A. move back from your screen, see how it reads SE CRET? tighten the gap between the SE and CRET. the lack of stem on the R is visually creating a gap as well. for SOCIETY, the S is floating too far to the left, and the tightness between I & E almost makes the I look non-existant. same issue with the Y as the R. with some slight modifications, your mark will be greatly improved.Option C is best...I also gotta agree w/ 54Chevy on the letter spacing. Fixing the spacing between the letters will improve the overall look. (MLF) Chicago Cannons, (IHA) Phoenix Firebirds - 2021 Xtreme Cup Champions (WAFL) Phoenix Federals - WAFL World Bowl XII Champions (Defunct) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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