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I just started working on this concept just for fun and I have hit a wall on how to round the logo out and make it look good. I know the smoke is all kinds of messed up. I have tried about 4 different designs for the smoke and nothing looks right. Any CC would be great.

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It looks like you're trying to combine two different visual conventions for smoke at the same time. One is puffy, billow, lots of partial circles overlapping--like a cumulus cloud. The other convention is long, streaming curves, like S's on their sides and stretched out. I'd try both--separately!--and see which one works better.

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Ok, really good start. Just a coupla suggestions. First and most simply, lose the second smokestack on the second wordmark, one is enough. Second, I would incorporate a little more black into the scheme because it looks very monochromatic right now. Finally, just a small detail, I think the A in the wordmark needs some work, because the lack of a line in the middle of it makes it appear like a lowercase N. This is a really good start besides those couple things, and I am looking forward to seeing the uniforms you come up with.

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Ok, really good start. Just a coupla suggestions. First and most simply, lose the second smokestack on the second wordmark, one is enough. Second, I would incorporate a little more black into the scheme because it looks very monochromatic right now. Finally, just a small detail, I think the A in the wordmark needs some work, because the lack of a line in the middle of it makes it appear like a lowercase N. This is a really good start besides those couple things, and I am looking forward to seeing the uniforms you come up with.

Thanks for the feedback. Since I'm new to this I was just wondering do most of you guys make your own templates for uniforms?

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Ok, really good start. Just a coupla suggestions. First and most simply, lose the second smokestack on the second wordmark, one is enough. Second, I would incorporate a little more black into the scheme because it looks very monochromatic right now. Finally, just a small detail, I think the A in the wordmark needs some work, because the lack of a line in the middle of it makes it appear like a lowercase N. This is a really good start besides those couple things, and I am looking forward to seeing the uniforms you come up with.

Thanks for the feedback. Since I'm new to this I was just wondering do most of you guys make your own templates for uniforms?

I'm not much of a uniform concept maker myself, but I know that some make their own and some use other ones. It's fine to use someone else's template as long as you credit where you found it.

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