DS729 Posted August 11, 2014 Share Posted August 11, 2014 That Husky needs some work, try rounding it out a little bit more, it looks quite blocky for an animal. And, I'd move the fleur-de-lis up to the shoulder or remove it at all, it likes forced into the middle of they jersey, and is hard to see with the color change. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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T-ROY Posted August 12, 2014 Share Posted August 12, 2014 ANL sounds like a great name *sarcasm intended*. I would change the name to National Association of Lacrosse (NAL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PSUcelticsWON95 Posted August 12, 2014 Share Posted August 12, 2014 ANL sounds like a great name *sarcasm intended*. I would change the name to National Association of Lacrosse (NAL)Agree to both Also, get rid of the tiny script in the stick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrWonka Posted August 12, 2014 Share Posted August 12, 2014 ANL sounds like a great name *sarcasm intended*. I would change the name to National Association of Lacrosse (NAL)Or (unless it's taken and I'm unaware) the NLA- National Lacrosse Association. I feel like the of in there would be unneeded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-ROY Posted August 12, 2014 Share Posted August 12, 2014 ANL sounds like a great name *sarcasm intended*. I would change the name to National Association of Lacrosse (NAL)Or (unless it's taken and I'm unaware) the NLA- National Lacrosse Association. I feel like the of in there would be unneeded. I would have suggested NLA, but I'm too familiar with National League A (Switzerland's top hockey league/One of the strongest euro hockey leagues), but I guess it would be fine as lacrosse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
@UniformDesigns Posted August 12, 2014 Share Posted August 12, 2014 So I'm back what happened before won't happen again. Anyway is the Seattle Storm design I think it turned out great but tell me if I should fix anything. I could not take ANL anymore so I fixed the logo. It seemed like there was too much open space in the logo and I made the border symmetrical Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hockeyny13 Posted August 12, 2014 Share Posted August 12, 2014 the storms decent but i don't like how theres no team branding on the jersey or shorts. the only way to tell that the team is the seattle storm is by the helmet. and the NLA is much better than ANL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted August 12, 2014 Share Posted August 12, 2014 Color balance issue again, the home is green heavy, the away is blue heavy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
@UniformDesigns Posted August 12, 2014 Share Posted August 12, 2014 Storm update-Added Storm logo to sleeve and pants-Fixed away uniform Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-ROY Posted August 12, 2014 Share Posted August 12, 2014 I would eliminate gray alltogether Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
@UniformDesigns Posted August 12, 2014 Share Posted August 12, 2014 I would eliminate gray alltogetherWhy and what color should replace it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted August 12, 2014 Share Posted August 12, 2014 WhiteYou got grey on the homes but not the aways Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-ROY Posted August 12, 2014 Share Posted August 12, 2014 I would eliminate gray alltogetherWhy and what color should replace it?Change it with white. The gray makes everything muggy and hard to read Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
@UniformDesigns Posted August 13, 2014 Share Posted August 13, 2014 Updated Storm-All gray removed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrWonka Posted August 13, 2014 Share Posted August 13, 2014 that's definitely better. However, I'm not behind the jersey design. The team name is STORM. I want to feel that in the jersey. A very sharp and very aggressive design. I mean like llfhockey said, Lacrosse is very outside of the box with the designs. I would try to push the limits rather than what you have here. Or at least take the sleeve design you have and give it some points, or strikes to give it a sharper feel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-ROY Posted August 13, 2014 Share Posted August 13, 2014 Updated Storm-All gray removedMuch Better!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted August 13, 2014 Share Posted August 13, 2014 Updated Storm-All gray removedMake the Storm have lightning for striping instead of the normal looking striping. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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PaperThin Posted August 13, 2014 Share Posted August 13, 2014 Im not a fan of the orange helmet, there should be some black in it.Also I'm not feeling a Bengal vibe in the jerseys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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