Whittier S

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  1. NFL Logos by MCrosby - added Green Bay Packers

    I've always hated the Broncos logo--maybe take on that next?
  2. IFHL - International Floor Hockey League

    You have two teams in a five-team division with virtually the same palette.
  3. Tampa Bay Buccaneers refresh

    That number on back is too big--try it with 88 and you'll see.
  4. Carolina Hurricanes Redesign - Help needed!

    C = the upper half of the white shape H = the lower part of that C plus the "spur" coming off and down from it If the H part were eliminated, the C part would be much more obvious.
  5. Carolina Hurricanes Redesign - Help needed!

    I wouldn't worry about incorporating an H into the main logo. I think you could take a logo close to what you have now, with the focus on the C, and then in a secondary logo, incorporate an H the way you did in your first logo.
  6. Jazz and Sonics Concept

    But most of it will disappear if shrunk even slightly, so what's the point?
  7. Jazz and Sonics Concept

    The Sonics logos are much too detailed. They are illustrations, not logos. Consider what is lost when the logo is shrunk down. The Jazz is okay, though I think enlarging the wordmark will help with the dead space.
  8. Alaska Anchorage Seawolves Concept: Sun Added 1/17/18

    Yes, add that midnight sun!
  9. My concepts

    For the tiger, why don't you just make the border on the back of the neck go with the fur? It will look stronger than what you have now and also look closer to the logo that inspired it.
  10. Boston Madness like Boston, Mass. (Which also goes with Boston Massacre)
  11. NFL Logos by MCrosby - added Green Bay Packers

    This panther looks so happy. Not fierce at all.
  12. Thought of another: Texas Vortex
  13. Okay, XFL names, some of these I'm seconding... Boston: Renegades, Terrors (like "Boston Terriers") Chicago: Chill, Shakedown, Dons Detroit: Diesels Los Angeles: Gladiators, Legion (of demons..?), Mastodons New York: Gargoyles, Emperors St. Louis: Xplorers Texas: Terror, Massacre (as in chainsaw) Las Vegas: Venom, Vice, Blackjax, Luck, Silverbax
  14. Winnipeg Jets Concept

    I don't understand the J. Why doesn't the white key line go down into the bowl of the J?
  15. Winnipeg Jets Concept

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  16. Växjö Lakers (SHL) Concept

    I look at the striping and keep thinking it has some heraldry significance because of the crest. So, for me at least, it seems to be saying more than intended.
  17. NFL Logos by MCrosby - added Green Bay Packers

    The football. The halo. Just utter genius.
  18. Minnesota Timberwolves Logo *New Tweaks* 1/5/18

    Images 1, 3, and 5.
  19. I'd put the shades of the two reds just a bit further apart. I'd also better integrate the wordmark with the logo. Otherwise, it's very well done.
  20. Detroit Lions Logo Concept

    This is a strong direction. It looks like an old-school radiator cap, which of course fits the Motor City.
  21. Pulv! Logolympiad entries

    I'm going to jump around a bit, I think. The Pretoria Pride wordmark is pretty strong--that was a particularly competitive event. The only issue I have with it is that the P and E are soo big, to the point that it looks like P rid E. If those two letters had been just a little smaller, it would have been one of my medal contenders. The challenge with the Smart Sportswear branding is that, while it looks great in color and at a large scale, it looks pretty cluttered in black-and-white, especially at a small scale. The challenge with athletic-wear branding is that the logos are often used in very small applications, like on a uniform, so they need to be recognizable when shrunk way down.
  22. US Cricket League - Beltway and Chicago logos open!

    Bit of a mouthful. Would just Commonwealth CC work?
  23. US Cricket League - Beltway and Chicago logos open!

    Oh, I do like this, especially because you originally thought of Philadelphia as the league home--you could make a history where the league headquarters moved from Philadelphia to Denver.
  24. HRC4's Logolympiad Portfolio

    Number 10 was a good idea, but the 3D makes it look almost cinematic when it was supposed to be a patch. That was honestly my only real qualm with it--had you gone for a flatter approach, it likely would have been one of my medal contenders.
  25. Pulv! Logolympiad entries

    I have C&C for all of them, but I have limited time at the moment. I will say that, had you removed the flag on #7 and just used the skull, sword, and hockey stick, it would have been one of my medal contenders. It was very slick, but the flag took away from its flexibility in applications. If you can fit the logo neatly in a square or circle, that is ideal, and without the flag, you can do that.