timberwolf Posted June 1, 2015 Share Posted June 1, 2015 A couple weeks ago I started a redesign for my high school. It didn't go well. I started a new thread to show off my new progress (the old one is on page 5 or 6). I hope you all enjoy! I spent a lot of time doing this. Things to keep in mind;It's not done! I will be updating it based on what you guys think and say and choose as your favourites!I will be doing an alternate uniform for 4 sports (baseball is already up).The leaf logo symbolizes how multicultural my school is, and how different our country, Canada, is as well.The crown is our old logo and I happened to like it, so I included it!The 3 stripes is not Adidas, before you ask, it's a religious meaning referring to the Holy Trinity (God the Father, the Son, and the Holy Spirit).Read Now in ISSUU! (This was the rough draft, the good one is below)Read the Good Copy Here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jrcollis714 Posted June 1, 2015 Share Posted June 1, 2015 Very generic, I don't like the Baseball uniforms. Make them seem more like a minor league team. Maybe more like the Biloxi Shuckers. Favorites: Dallas Cowboys, New York Yankees, New York Rangers, New York Knicks, Cam Newton ND Irish Least Favorites: New York Giants, New York Mets, Washington Capitals, Pittsburgh Penguins, Philadelphia Eagles, OBJ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted June 1, 2015 Author Share Posted June 1, 2015 *Bump for more feedback* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSmith48 Posted June 1, 2015 Share Posted June 1, 2015 I think that the baseball uniform is a bit too gaudy. To match the feel of your logos with the uniform, I think you should get rid of the gradient and add the red as a outline on the text and numbering, but you have a good start to the brand though. Visit my website at SSmith Designs (google.com) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted June 1, 2015 Share Posted June 1, 2015 the cavs' script makes it look unprofessional, gradient jerseys seem a bit much, especially for baseball. The crests are for the most part the same idea, so maybe a monogram or something could replace that 2ndary Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted June 2, 2015 Author Share Posted June 2, 2015 Okay so I'll think for now I'll just take the uniforms out until I finish the logos and that part first. I'll have some options for primary and secondary up by tomorrow hopefully!TWolf (just like this post if you've seen it so I know I'm not just saying this for myself) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted June 2, 2015 Author Share Posted June 2, 2015 Okay here's the concepts for the primary logos...comment your top TWO!And here's the idea for the tertiary logo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerrylawless3 Posted June 2, 2015 Share Posted June 2, 2015 D or C! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted June 2, 2015 Author Share Posted June 2, 2015 Thanks jerryBump for more feedback (at least three more people please?¿) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrAstrodome Posted June 3, 2015 Share Posted June 3, 2015 C or H. All New: NFL RandomWebsite ★ Behance ★ Twitter ★ Geekier Twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted June 3, 2015 Author Share Posted June 3, 2015 Thanks astro! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted June 10, 2015 Author Share Posted June 10, 2015 Okay sorry for the delay but here's the completed project (stage 1). It has vintage logos, primary ones, uniforms, merch, and gear.Read it now on ISSUU (stage 1, this is also at the top of the page)Info on the Erika Series; This year, about two months ago, a girl was involved in a tragic accident while skiing. Her name was Erika and she was 16 years old. She passed away from a serious head injury about 15 hours later. It was awful and the school was a mess for awhile. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jabel777 Posted June 10, 2015 Share Posted June 10, 2015 Everything looks good, but why is there and apostrophe in "King's"? I think it should be "Kings". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted June 10, 2015 Author Share Posted June 10, 2015 Everything looks good, but why is there and apostrophe in "King's"? I think it should be "Kings".The reason for that is we are a Christian school so we the King's people (as in we belong to him). God is the King, by the way. Hope that's clear!TWolf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jabel777 Posted June 11, 2015 Share Posted June 11, 2015 Everything looks good, but why is there and apostrophe in "King's"? I think it should be "Kings".The reason for that is we are a Christian school so we the King's people (as in we belong to him). God is the King, by the way.Hope that's clear!TWolfOh ok. I understand that. Thanks for clearing that up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1insaneguy Posted June 11, 2015 Share Posted June 11, 2015 C or B Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jrcollis714 Posted June 16, 2015 Share Posted June 16, 2015 E is my favorite, then D Favorites: Dallas Cowboys, New York Yankees, New York Rangers, New York Knicks, Cam Newton ND Irish Least Favorites: New York Giants, New York Mets, Washington Capitals, Pittsburgh Penguins, Philadelphia Eagles, OBJ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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