BostonStrong13 Posted June 21, 2016 Share Posted June 21, 2016 I have decided to start a series, and make Alternate Jerseys for the teams that don't have them. Number 1 is the Panthers, I went military-style alot with this one, making it seem like the US Army coats with one label saying your name and the other saying U.S. Airforce, U.S. Army, ect. c/c appreciated "This is our f*****g city. And nobody is going to dictate our freedom. Stay strong."—David Ortiz #34ever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tigerslionspistonshabs Posted June 21, 2016 Share Posted June 21, 2016 I like where you're going with it, but the patches seem a bit overpowering. Almost looks like they're ads. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Philly's Phinest Posted June 21, 2016 Share Posted June 21, 2016 The patches are a bit too much for me as well. If you drop those, you definitely have a solid concept. Nice work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New York's Greatest Posted June 21, 2016 Share Posted June 21, 2016 48 minutes ago, BostonStrong13 said: I have decided to start a series, and make Alternate Jerseys for the teams that don't have them. Number 1 is the Panthers, I went military-style alot with this one, making it seem like the US Army coats with one label saying your name and the other saying U.S. Airforce, U.S. Army, ect. c/c appreciated Not sure how I feel with the name on the front, other than that it looks good, although I'd make the name in the back a brighter more visible gold or make it white http://i.imgur.com/Yz8Jexr.png Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BostonStrong13 Posted June 22, 2016 Author Share Posted June 22, 2016 17 hours ago, tigerslionspistonshabs said: I like where you're going with it, but the patches seem a bit overpowering. Almost looks like they're ads. 17 hours ago, Philly's Phinest said: The patches are a bit too much for me as well. If you drop those, you definitely have a solid concept. Nice work 16 hours ago, New York's Greatest said: Not sure how I feel with the name on the front, other than that it looks good, although I'd make the name in the back a brighter more visible gold or make it white I will agree with you guys on the patches, now that I see it. I just made the Captains "C". c/c appreciated Arizona to come later today/early tomorrow! "This is our f*****g city. And nobody is going to dictate our freedom. Stay strong."—David Ortiz #34ever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ahowe6464 Posted June 22, 2016 Share Posted June 22, 2016 Update looks a lot better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New York's Greatest Posted June 22, 2016 Share Posted June 22, 2016 4 hours ago, BostonStrong13 said: I will agree with you guys on the patches, now that I see it. I just made the Captains "C". c/c appreciated Arizona to come later today/early tomorrow! This looks much better flows perfectly...btw what program did you use? http://i.imgur.com/Yz8Jexr.png Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tigerslionspistonshabs Posted June 22, 2016 Share Posted June 22, 2016 Much better. Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BostonStrong13 Posted June 23, 2016 Author Share Posted June 23, 2016 18 hours ago, New York's Greatest said: This looks much better flows perfectly...btw what program did you use? Paint.net "This is our f*****g city. And nobody is going to dictate our freedom. Stay strong."—David Ortiz #34ever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BostonStrong13 Posted June 23, 2016 Author Share Posted June 23, 2016 I have finally finished the Coyotes after a long brainstorm... For this jersey I wanted to incorporate their history of jerseys, starting with the Coyote Head logo in '03/'04 - I added the striping pattern that they used in '03 and carried to '15.. I also added a touch of the new jersey released last year. c/c appreciated "This is our f*****g city. And nobody is going to dictate our freedom. Stay strong."—David Ortiz #34ever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New York's Greatest Posted June 23, 2016 Share Posted June 23, 2016 20 minutes ago, BostonStrong13 said: I have finally finished the Coyotes after a long brainstorm... For this jersey I wanted to incorporate their history of jerseys, starting with the Coyote Head logo in '03/'04 - I added the striping pattern that they used in '03 and carried to '15.. I also added a touch of the new jersey released last year. c/c appreciated Looks nice really like it! http://i.imgur.com/Yz8Jexr.png Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BostonStrong13 Posted June 23, 2016 Author Share Posted June 23, 2016 Any requests for the next team? Buffalo Chicago Dallas Detroit LA Montreal Nashville New Jersey Winnipeg "This is our f*****g city. And nobody is going to dictate our freedom. Stay strong."—David Ortiz #34ever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72freebie Posted June 24, 2016 Share Posted June 24, 2016 10 hours ago, New York's Greatest said: Looks nice really like it! 10 hours ago, BostonStrong13 said: I have finally finished the Coyotes after a long brainstorm... For this jersey I wanted to incorporate their history of jerseys, starting with the Coyote Head logo in '03/'04 - I added the striping pattern that they used in '03 and carried to '15.. I also added a touch of the new jersey released last year. c/c appreciated I am liking your progress. Some execution errors on this one. Both shoulder patches are upside down. Think of it as if you are looking at the jersey from the side. It might help with the perspective. Also the numbers and name are a little high up on the back. Also you need to do numbers on the arms as well. I would also get rid of the white because it blends too much with the sand color. I would replace it with black. Good progress but the execution is still lacking a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New York's Greatest Posted June 24, 2016 Share Posted June 24, 2016 2 hours ago, BostonStrong13 said: Any requests for the next team? Buffalo Chicago Dallas Detroit LA Montreal Nashville New Jersey Winnipeg Buffalo,New Jersey,Winnipeg,then Nashville http://i.imgur.com/Yz8Jexr.png Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BostonStrong13 Posted June 24, 2016 Author Share Posted June 24, 2016 19 hours ago, 72freebie said: I am liking your progress. Some execution errors on this one. Both shoulder patches are upside down. Think of it as if you are looking at the jersey from the side. It might help with the perspective. Also the numbers and name are a little high up on the back. Also you need to do numbers on the arms as well. I would also get rid of the white because it blends too much with the sand color. I would replace it with black. Good progress but the execution is still lacking a bit. I understand now on the shoulders. For the NOB, the yoke ends right under the name. Updated: "This is our f*****g city. And nobody is going to dictate our freedom. Stay strong."—David Ortiz #34ever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldconcepts Posted June 24, 2016 Share Posted June 24, 2016 For Arizona, I'd try filling the hem with maroon to emulate the shoulder, moving the hem stripe up, and separating the two with a tan stripe of equal thickness of the shoulder tan space. Twitter: @ldconcepts / Instagram: @ld.concepts / Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BostonStrong13 Posted June 26, 2016 Author Share Posted June 26, 2016 On 6/24/2016 at 5:44 PM, ldconcepts said: For Arizona, I'd try filling the hem with maroon to emulate the shoulder, moving the hem stripe up, and separating the two with a tan stripe of equal thickness of the shoulder tan space. I did that, and this is going to be my HJC Open submission as well. c/c appreciated "This is our f*****g city. And nobody is going to dictate our freedom. Stay strong."—David Ortiz #34ever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BostonStrong13 Posted June 27, 2016 Author Share Posted June 27, 2016 For the Sabres, I threw it back to their first dark uniform, without completely ripping it off. I added white in between the striping and on the collar. I am also going to make this a 12 team thread, with the Maple Leafs now without an alternate uniform. c/c appreciated "This is our f*****g city. And nobody is going to dictate our freedom. Stay strong."—David Ortiz #34ever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldconcepts Posted June 27, 2016 Share Posted June 27, 2016 The general idea is good for Buffalo, but the yellow and white bleed into each other, and the phantom yoke doesn't add anything. Twitter: @ldconcepts / Instagram: @ld.concepts / Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BostonStrong13 Posted June 27, 2016 Author Share Posted June 27, 2016 4 hours ago, ldconcepts said: The general idea is good for Buffalo, but the yellow and white bleed into each other, and the phantom yoke doesn't add anything. "This is our f*****g city. And nobody is going to dictate our freedom. Stay strong."—David Ortiz #34ever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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