MDC Posted February 23, 2009 Share Posted February 23, 2009 What do you guys think, It's just something I came up with on MS Paint ---Owner of the NHA's Philadelphia Quakers, the UBA's Chicago Skyliners, and the CFA's Portland Beavers (2010 CFA2 Champions)--- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
burgundy Posted February 23, 2009 Share Posted February 23, 2009 Way too many rays, but it's a good start. I'd also change the "Suns" font. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted February 23, 2009 Share Posted February 23, 2009 Tone down the sun rays. It looks like a sea urchin. I think you can turn this into something good though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted February 23, 2009 Share Posted February 23, 2009 I agree tone down the rays. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted February 23, 2009 Share Posted February 23, 2009 What do you guys think, It's just something I came up with on MS PaintThe idea is certainly there, but the execution definitely isn't. Less is going to be more for you at this point. -Make the basketball less oval-shaped and more circular.-less sun rays-Fonts other than Microsoft Word fonts-Pick a color scheme (3-4 colors and stick with it)I'm excited to see what this turns into. It's a good idea and you have a good start to work with. Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MDC Posted February 23, 2009 Author Share Posted February 23, 2009 Haha, yeah, everyone is right...way too many rays.I'll try to fix that and touch up for the other suggestions by tomorrow ---Owner of the NHA's Philadelphia Quakers, the UBA's Chicago Skyliners, and the CFA's Portland Beavers (2010 CFA2 Champions)--- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRealPepman Posted February 23, 2009 Share Posted February 23, 2009 Half-okay. Some of my comments are already posted by others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrueYankee26 Posted February 23, 2009 Share Posted February 23, 2009 Way too much sun rays, plus, they look extremely lopsided, otherwise, nice try. trueyankee26.wordpress.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beast Mode Posted February 23, 2009 Share Posted February 23, 2009 I'm with everyone, too many rays. This is a really good first concept though. Nice job. It's like Frankenbird.Help Fort Atlantic grow! Help Fort Atlantic's industry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MDC Posted February 24, 2009 Author Share Posted February 24, 2009 Here is version numero dos for my Phoenix Suns logo.What i changed-Added bottom half of ball/sun-Fixed the ridiculous sun rays-Made the ball look like a ball-Got rid of Suns script, moved PHX to centerI like it much better, but i think I should maybe add the 'Suns' script backLet me know if you think this is better, worse, or if I should add jerseys, other logos, or tweak it, or whatnot. ---Owner of the NHA's Philadelphia Quakers, the UBA's Chicago Skyliners, and the CFA's Portland Beavers (2010 CFA2 Champions)--- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beast Mode Posted February 24, 2009 Share Posted February 24, 2009 Getting better, but I think either add rays all the way around or cut the ball in half. It looks kinda awkward right now. It's like Frankenbird.Help Fort Atlantic grow! Help Fort Atlantic's industry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted February 24, 2009 Share Posted February 24, 2009 It's an improvement, but your next step should be to use a font other than one that comes with Microsoft word for the logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MDC Posted February 25, 2009 Author Share Posted February 25, 2009 It's an improvement, but your next step should be to use a font other than one that comes with Microsoft word for the logo.i didnt use a font from Word. it is basic, but It's not from wordI will change the rays again sometime soon ---Owner of the NHA's Philadelphia Quakers, the UBA's Chicago Skyliners, and the CFA's Portland Beavers (2010 CFA2 Champions)--- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted February 25, 2009 Share Posted February 25, 2009 It's an improvement, but your next step should be to use a font other than one that comes with Microsoft word for the logo.i didnt use a font from Word. it is basic, but It's not from wordI will change the rays again sometime soonMy bad, it looked like Impact at first glance. While we're on the wordmark though, I suggest making the outline of it thicker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRealPepman Posted February 25, 2009 Share Posted February 25, 2009 Here is version numero dos for my Phoenix Suns logo.What i changed-Added bottom half of ball/sun-Fixed the ridiculous sun rays-Made the ball look like a ball-Got rid of Suns script, moved PHX to centerI like it much better, but i think I should maybe add the 'Suns' script backLet me know if you think this is better, worse, or if I should add jerseys, other logos, or tweak it, or whatnot.Good concept thou. Pleas use the current font and let's see. If you don't have the font, it's okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MDC Posted February 26, 2009 Author Share Posted February 26, 2009 Here is one more update, it might be the last one. I am getting kind of sick of looking at this logo. Maybe putting together a whole package, or just moving on will help. I added the rest of the sun, which looks great and added in a SUNS script. It looks kinda sloppy, that was because of the resizing and my overall laziness. Like I said, I kinda want to move on. So without any more delay, here it is:C&C appreciated ---Owner of the NHA's Philadelphia Quakers, the UBA's Chicago Skyliners, and the CFA's Portland Beavers (2010 CFA2 Champions)--- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted February 27, 2009 Share Posted February 27, 2009 Have you thought of trying to add some flames to the 'Suns' script too? This has come a long way from the first one. Way to take some good C&C. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beast Mode Posted February 27, 2009 Share Posted February 27, 2009 Beautiful. Maybe take out PHX and move Suns into the middle with flames. It's like Frankenbird.Help Fort Atlantic grow! Help Fort Atlantic's industry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuckymack Posted February 27, 2009 Share Posted February 27, 2009 If it's sloppy and you're over it, why'd ya post? Sigs are for sissies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRealPepman Posted March 1, 2009 Share Posted March 1, 2009 Here is one more update, it might be the last one. I am getting kind of sick of looking at this logo. Maybe putting together a whole package, or just moving on will help. I added the rest of the sun, which looks great and added in a SUNS script. It looks kinda sloppy, that was because of the resizing and my overall laziness. Like I said, I kinda want to move on. So without any more delay, here it is:C&C appreciatedI was referring to the current font of the uniform. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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