vicfurth Posted July 20, 2004 Share Posted July 20, 2004 Hey, guys. I'm creating a logo for the Professional Football Alliance (PFA) and need your help to make it the best it can be. I'm wanting (groveling, perhaps ) comments and constructive criticism to make the logo better. Okay, enough jibber-jabber on my part, here's the logo... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pittunited Posted July 20, 2004 Share Posted July 20, 2004 Not really crazy about the flaming letters. OWNER -- Pittsburgh Spiders (UL) * Dynamo Missouri (PLA) * Montreal Maroons (SHL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chapi Posted July 20, 2004 Share Posted July 20, 2004 the font choice could be better. the whole logo could be more compacted not so wide. but it's ok start. www.dap-studio.pl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fiasco! Posted July 20, 2004 Share Posted July 20, 2004 the way the flames are coming from the football is making it look kinda texas longhorn-ish....the font choice is not so hot (no pun intended), imo. overall, it looks rather clipartish.i hope that wasn't too harsh, but i know you are capable of better work, vic. i've seen it. LinkedIn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mac Posted July 21, 2004 Share Posted July 21, 2004 i dont understand what flames have to do with this league, but maybe they do somehow and i just dont know it, also i would go with big bold block letters for the font. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted July 21, 2004 Author Share Posted July 21, 2004 I completely overhauled the logo concept (as seen in above post). Here is version 2.0...Five e-dollars to the person who can identify the player. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted July 21, 2004 Share Posted July 21, 2004 it still kind of looks like a steerhead...what if you only had one set of flames, but had them shoot up from the football? kind of like a comet on fire, but more vertical than angledI like the idea, but I want to see it more minimal...maybe have the football (stitches only, no need for stripes) and the flames the same color, and have PFA reversed out of the ball Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted July 21, 2004 Author Share Posted July 21, 2004 I don't have the flaming football logo anymore. I did think of that, but didn't like the idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rozilla74 Posted July 21, 2004 Share Posted July 21, 2004 That's either a Gramatica or Gary Anderson. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted July 21, 2004 Author Share Posted July 21, 2004 Nope. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted July 21, 2004 Share Posted July 21, 2004 the first thing I see in your logo is an arch...if we have a team in St. Louis it will look like that team's logo first Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STL FANATIC Posted July 21, 2004 Share Posted July 21, 2004 Keep the silhouette in thought, but I'd say overhaul the rest...I'm goin with Brett Favre. JUSTIN STRIEBEL | PORTFOLIO | RESUME | CONTACT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted July 21, 2004 Share Posted July 21, 2004 Is that Adam Vinatieri? GO PATS!!! Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jkrdevil Posted July 21, 2004 Share Posted July 21, 2004 I'm going to go with Troy Aikman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frenchie Posted July 21, 2004 Share Posted July 21, 2004 I completely overhauled the logo concept (as seen in above post). Here is version 2.0...Five e-dollars to the person who can identify the player. Payton Manning? @Frenchie_TO Owner of the Rochester Americans of the MLH Owner of the Toronto Frenchies of the GCFHL6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
habsfan9 Posted July 21, 2004 Share Posted July 21, 2004 randall cunningham?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted July 21, 2004 Author Share Posted July 21, 2004 Is that Adam Vinatieri? GO PATS!!! DING, DING, DING!!! Adam Vinitieri after winning Super Bowl XXXVI. What do I do with the back of the logo? I had to put something there. Otherwise it was empty. Any ideas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STL FANATIC Posted July 21, 2004 Share Posted July 21, 2004 ...I changed my mind...that silhouette needs to go to... JUSTIN STRIEBEL | PORTFOLIO | RESUME | CONTACT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winters in buffalo Posted July 22, 2004 Share Posted July 22, 2004 Dunno. Not as good as your other stuff. I've been workin on some PFA concepts too, but can't seem to come up with anything that I like more than fiasco's set, which I think is ideal anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted July 22, 2004 Author Share Posted July 22, 2004 I think I improved it. I have Adam jumping out of the star. Whaddya think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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