bucknut42 Posted April 24, 2018 Share Posted April 24, 2018 Hey forum! I'm working on an elephant logo, and I am stuck. I want to make it look more fierce, and also to make it slightly more detailed but still usable as a sports logo. Any feedback or ideas would be greatly appreciated! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJWalker45 Posted April 24, 2018 Share Posted April 24, 2018 I'd turn the tusks more towards the inside and thicken them rather than extend them up. I'd enlarge the eyes and rotate them down so that it looks like he's scowling at the person in front of him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pianoknight Posted April 24, 2018 Share Posted April 24, 2018 Okay, 5-minute Paint job: First, if you want it to look more fierce, you could drop the pupils in the eyes and make the eyebrows slant inward a bit more. Add more definition of the trunk further up the elephant's face. Right now, his trunk just sort of joins the face in a really vague manner. Put some vertical strokes there and define the trunk more. You could add a few more of those wrinkles, too. Finally, I added the tip of his trunk hanging out to one side. His trunk currently looks REALLY short. Yes, he could be holding it up under his mouth (like when an elephant eats) but it sort of just disappears altogether. Chances are, you'd see a little tip of it sticking to one side or the other. It also adds a little bit of asymmetry to your logo which is NOT a bad thing. Overall, this is a great start! 5th in NAT. TITLES | 2nd in CONF. TITLES | 5th in HEISMAN | 7th in DRAFTS | 8th in ALL-AMER | 7th in WINS | 4th in BOWLS | 1st in SELLOUTS | 1st GAMEDAY SIGN Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bucknut42 Posted April 24, 2018 Author Share Posted April 24, 2018 Thanks for the help @pianoknight and @MJWalker45. I've already made some significant changes to the logo, and here is a comparison of the two. Any other C&C is still greatly appreciated! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stumpygremlin Posted April 25, 2018 Share Posted April 25, 2018 First off, that new logo is MILES better than the old one. If it were me, I'd not turn the tusks inward quite so much, but other than that, huge improvement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pianoknight Posted April 25, 2018 Share Posted April 25, 2018 Amazing update! 5th in NAT. TITLES | 2nd in CONF. TITLES | 5th in HEISMAN | 7th in DRAFTS | 8th in ALL-AMER | 7th in WINS | 4th in BOWLS | 1st in SELLOUTS | 1st GAMEDAY SIGN Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeadFish Posted April 26, 2018 Share Posted April 26, 2018 Nice update - I'd try thicken and lengthen the brow (keeping the end as a point as you have now) to really drive home the frown. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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