PWG44 Posted June 17, 2005 Share Posted June 17, 2005 I'm a newbie here... been scoping out the great work submitted by everyone.I'm preparing a portfolio to send out to any and all leagues to try and pick up some work. To do that I've created some fantasy leagues and I plan on creating identities for all the teams... So, here is a preview from Paul's Baseball League.http://notions-online.com/images/sd_hammerheads.jpgRevise:http://notions-online.com/images/sd_hammerheads.pngLet me know what you think.Thanks,Paul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwoRsAndTwoLs Posted June 17, 2005 Share Posted June 17, 2005 Hey, I like!If you were shooting for somewhat cartoony (and thereby, something more minor league), you definitely hit the mark. If I were to offer any advice, I would say to keep the letters solid while they're on a uniform, so probably keep the home "Hammerheads" gray... you might be able to get away with that on the SD, though. Every Fifth Day is a Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jezus_Ghoti Posted June 17, 2005 Share Posted June 17, 2005 What the hell is that gray thing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edmfan16 Posted June 17, 2005 Share Posted June 17, 2005 What the hell is that gray thing? Hammerhead shark? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pauly07 Posted June 17, 2005 Share Posted June 17, 2005 I like it. I would change the perspective on the shark. The way he's drawn now it took me a minute of thinking, "They're called the hammerheads, why's the mascot a badger?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColeJ Posted June 17, 2005 Share Posted June 17, 2005 that yellowy home jersey looks gross to me... a whiter-white would look much cleaner and i had to look at the hammerheads logo for about 2 full minutes before i figured out that he's swinging a bat.... and even then, i only got it because i was desperately LOOKING for a hammer head shark in that grey mass.i think the problem is that his arm looks like his jaw, and his mouth looks like his nose.i really like where you're going with it, and i think with a little bit of cleanup work, this will be an awesome concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dilbert Posted June 17, 2005 Share Posted June 17, 2005 The shark could use a little work but otherwise I like! Signature intentionally left blank Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PWG44 Posted June 22, 2005 Author Share Posted June 22, 2005 http://notions-online.com/images/sd_hammerheads.pngAbove is a revision to the original post. I originally had a body on the shark but deleted it from the original, I've put the body of the shark back and am happy with result... thanks for the feedback one and all.To answer some questions...I was inspired by the SF giants off-white home jerseysI don't have a target audience (majors, minors or amatuer) in mind regarding style of the logo. I hope to cover all the bases (sorry bad pun) as I create the other 29 teams in my fantasy league portfolio.Thanks again for the input and let me know what you think of the revise... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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