Camden Crazy Posted August 4, 2005 Share Posted August 4, 2005 My first attempt at a fantasy football team. Obviously with my team name, I incorporated Pocono Raceway into it as best as I could. I wanted to put a stock car in it, but with paint and not very good art skills, I couldn't make that happen. I think I did a pretty good job though. As for the uniforms, I designed them, Daisydukes cleaned them up a bit for me, and the project was finished. C&C appreciated as usual, enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyclopsis Joe Posted August 4, 2005 Share Posted August 4, 2005 POCONO SUXORZZA!!11Just kidding.Nicely done with the racetrack. A good use of their logo. Plus, if you have any racefans in the audience, they'll recognize the "Roaval" [© Darrel Waltrip].Which brings me to the negatives: If there's someone who sees this who doesn't know anything about NASCAR, they won't get the link between Pocono Racers and a triangle.Also, just a question: Why orange? I don't speak for democrats, democrats don't speak for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Camden Crazy Posted August 4, 2005 Author Share Posted August 4, 2005 Also, just a question: Why orange?It's my favorite color, and it kind of fit in . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BCBoy Posted August 4, 2005 Share Posted August 4, 2005 LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THE JERSEY's, COLORSHATE, HATE, HATE the logo, sorry, I just don't like the colour scheme along with the whole logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stephen93 Posted August 4, 2005 Share Posted August 4, 2005 ok i dont get the triangle at all... oh yea and really great avatar!!! FLYERS 05-06 STANLEY CUP WINNERS (knock on wood) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyclopsis Joe Posted August 6, 2005 Share Posted August 6, 2005 ok i dont get the triangle at allPocono Raceway in Long Pond, Penn. Their Logo (and the track design) is a triangle.I thought I already said that? I don't speak for democrats, democrats don't speak for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shootachtung Posted August 6, 2005 Share Posted August 6, 2005 I really like these. The color and logos and everything. Great job!Not a big fan of Pocono Raceway, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iccomics Posted August 7, 2005 Share Posted August 7, 2005 hey this is the sasquatch, have to say, you have the worst logo in the league, but that is nothing compared to the teams talent. i dont know racing, so i am not aware of the triangle, and i think you really need a racecar to make the logo more standout. the logos in ufl are cool, and standoutexamples:my own, the sasquatchnew orleans crawfishoakland terrorlb venomvirginia vulturesportland nightmarethen ther are the okay ones...breakersamericans tribebut yours, along with shamrocks is just terrible. fix it! soon! non eed for an overhaul, just some tweaks, and better effects, maybe a car. just find one on the internet and go over it in your colors on paint. or, do what i did with the sasquatch, draw it w/ pencil, scan it, and work with it on paintgood luck in the ufl! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Camden Crazy Posted August 7, 2005 Author Share Posted August 7, 2005 Well like I said in my first post, my drawing skill, on computer or off, is non existent. The options of what I could do were very limited. Anything else that completely degrades my work and makes me ask myself if I want to waste my time doing this anymore? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jigga Posted August 7, 2005 Share Posted August 7, 2005 Camden,Please don't take anyone's C&C to heart. It's just one person's opinion of the work, not their assessment of you as a person. While iccomics' remarks do sound a bit "richard"-ish, don't worry about it. Just keep working on your logos and concepts if you get enjoyment from them. No one is great out of the chute. And as soon as I post something, you will certainly have proof of that Peace... On January 16, 2013 at 3:49 PM, NJTank said: Btw this is old hat for Notre Dame. Knits Rockne made up George Tip's death bed speech. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyclopsis Joe Posted August 7, 2005 Share Posted August 7, 2005 Actually, I don't think what Mr. "You suck" said was C&C.Constructive criticism is supposed to make it better, not tear it apart. I don't speak for democrats, democrats don't speak for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Camden Crazy Posted August 7, 2005 Author Share Posted August 7, 2005 Here's my best attempt at adding a race car to the logo: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat Posted August 7, 2005 Share Posted August 7, 2005 A racecar could make a good logo but the PR Triangle is great. The one with the wordmakr in it? Im not feeling it. Too plain and boring.The PR: Its simple, had connections to Pocono. A car could work as a secondary, but do not feel the need to change everything because your set is awesome right now. It might need something a littlew more racing connected but your uniforms especiaaly are very cool (except 2 whites, y ou only really need 1).icomics you got to cool it with your remarks. His is pretty good actually, and I wouldnt say the sasquatch is that great at all. So just tell him how to imrpve his stuff, before you make a list of logos that you think are better than his, when many of them have obvious flaws, that not even his do. Proud owner of the Utah Pioneers of the Continnental Baseball League.PACKER BACKER FOREVER! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iccomics Posted August 8, 2005 Share Posted August 8, 2005 just wondering, what is the sasquatch logo flaws? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iccomics Posted August 8, 2005 Share Posted August 8, 2005 once again, sorry bout the comments, here's some edits to your logo that i think are really cool, you can use them as your officila logo if you like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddiemill10 Posted August 8, 2005 Share Posted August 8, 2005 I love it, its auseome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mac Posted August 8, 2005 Share Posted August 8, 2005 The PR triangle is great, very kansas city chiefs esque, As a member of the UFL I don't mind and I like the rest of your uniforms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iccomics Posted August 8, 2005 Share Posted August 8, 2005 actully i made the logo, tom mollison, seattle sasquatch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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