elliott Posted April 29, 2007 Share Posted April 29, 2007 Hi everyone, I haven't posted a concept in a while because I've been occupied with the Logo history sigs. In one of my first topics I posted a logo for my Atlanta Lightning fantasy team, and DailyRich made some touch up on it, here it is:So I used that and created some jerseys. My secondary logo is a little weak, it is supposed to be an 'N' but also a lightning bolt coming out of a circle. I'm really having trouble with the script logos, thats not my strong point, so I used the 'N' in it. I also added another one because it kinda looks cool. For lack of a better font I used the ATL Thrashers font. C+C please, and also a little help on the font! Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koizim Posted April 30, 2007 Share Posted April 30, 2007 Many things wrong with this. First off, why is the secondary logo an N? Also, both wordmarks are terrible. The pants look good, but everything else looks sloppy. Engine, Engine, Number Nine, on the New York transit line, If my train goes off the track, pick it up! Pick it up! Pick it up! Back on the scene, crispy and clean, You can try, but then why, 'cause you can't intervene. We be the outcast, down for the settle. Won't play the rock, won't play the pebble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i am what i am Posted April 30, 2007 Share Posted April 30, 2007 Its pretty good just try changing the colors a little Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted April 30, 2007 Share Posted April 30, 2007 Why "N"? And the wordmarks need to be entirely revamped, but I do like where your going with the uniforms. Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whalersjets Posted April 30, 2007 Share Posted April 30, 2007 The secondary logo looks like you made it, then said "Nah" and crossed it off. But then you forgot to take it out of the design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidson Posted April 30, 2007 Share Posted April 30, 2007 mate, this definately has potential. the atl logo itself is probably enough to base a concept upon but the rest is shoddy. i wouldnt mind having a crack at sprusing up the logos and marks if you dont mind?really nice little concept, justy need to acrry it through the rest of the elements. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted April 30, 2007 Author Share Posted April 30, 2007 i wouldnt mind having a crack at sprusing up the logos and marks if you dont mind?Sure, I obviously need help with the script and secondary, but I just thought of a cool idea for a secondary logo that I am developing now. Thanks for any help! Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted May 1, 2007 Share Posted May 1, 2007 The entire thing reminds me of the RHI (Roller Hockey International), which is never good. I'd start over completely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted May 2, 2007 Author Share Posted May 2, 2007 i wouldnt mind having a crack at sprusing up the logos and marks if you dont mind?Sure, I obviously need help with the script and secondary, but I just thought of a cool idea for a secondary logo that I am developing now. Thanks for any help!Okay, I have no evidence why, but thanks for the help, I guess Here is my update, I hope you like my new alternate logo! Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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