stimpy Posted February 28, 2004 Share Posted February 28, 2004 http://www.freewebs.com/whaler_man/whaler.JPGwell iv been making jerseys with copy and paste logos but this is my first one with a logo i made so what do u think...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breakwood Posted February 28, 2004 Share Posted February 28, 2004 ummmm there isn't anything on you webpage. We need the link for the acctual image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stimpy Posted February 28, 2004 Author Share Posted February 28, 2004 sorry i fixed it check it out now...sorry bout that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breakwood Posted February 28, 2004 Share Posted February 28, 2004 I like the logo but im not a fan of the black jersey maybe if i was blue or green with the logo outlined in white i'd like it more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stimpy Posted February 28, 2004 Author Share Posted February 28, 2004 i kno id want that too but it dont look to good ill try to tweek it tho... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CC97 Posted February 28, 2004 Share Posted February 28, 2004 The logo's not bad, needs to be cleaned up in Illustrator and it should look good.Not a fan of the jerseys however, the colour scheme is not appealing at all.The black jersey, which should probably be either a forest green, or a navy blue, needs some light stripes, white/grey/silver, to seperate the dark colours from the lights on the jersey. See the triangles in the corners, as well as the arm stripes, you can hardly see the blue. The logo also needs an outline around it.The backs of the jerseys, same thing with the stripes... and those letterings gotta go, the faux-shadow seems out of place, and the font isn't too great. How many hockey jerseys have you seen with lowercase lettering on the back? The colours here need to be re-worked because there is absolutely no chance that people will be able to read dark blue numbers on black with green shadows.This wasn't meant to be rude, but meant to be constructive... you may think, "what the heck does this guy know?"... i've been viewing concepts for eight years, and am a design student at college... these things are burned into my brain... and when I started designing I got the same feeling when someone would correct me, but hey, they were right.If you want, make some of these adjustments and I'll take a look. --- Chris Creamer Founder/Editor, SportsLogos.Net "The Mothership" • News • Facebook • X/Twitter • Instagram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brass Posted February 28, 2004 Share Posted February 28, 2004 Hey, how do you get a blank page like that in FreeWebs? I have an account, but can only post my concepts under a link, not a blank space. On 4/10/2017 at 3:05 PM, Rollins Man said: what the hell is ccslc? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stimpy Posted February 29, 2004 Author Share Posted February 29, 2004 the blank page was when i right clicked and clicked on properties and copied the linko and cc97 it dont offend me this is my first onei changed it up a bithttp://www.freewebs.com/whaler_man/whales.JPGand i got 2 more i made...tell me what u think pleasehttp://www.freewebs.com/lightnin_jerse/LIGHTNIN.JPGhttp://www.freewebs.com/minnostar/untitled.JPG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NJTank Posted February 29, 2004 Share Posted February 29, 2004 Sorry man I gotta say this there is not a single good thing about any of these concepts. I understand theya re your first and you shoudl get better with practice, but I judge on how I would feel if a team wore these and I would not want to see em in action. www.sportsecyclopedia.com For the best in sports history go to the Sports E-Cyclopedia at http://www.sportsecyclopedia.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stimpy Posted February 29, 2004 Author Share Posted February 29, 2004 LOL thats great i wont get mad i kno i kno they are bad... im not mad...thanx for teh feedback i usta make other stuff and when id ask my friends how they were they would be like "awsome" and "great" even if it did suck im glad to see sum1 doesnt lie... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CityOfWalrus Posted February 29, 2004 Share Posted February 29, 2004 just a heads-up its Lecavalier not "La" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stimpy Posted March 1, 2004 Author Share Posted March 1, 2004 oh um oops o ur right ill fix that thanks for that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted March 1, 2004 Share Posted March 1, 2004 Can't say I liked the Lightning concept at all, but I found a few things about the jerseys in general and the Whalers and North Stars' concepts individually that show promise... like the Whalers' readable font, the unique logo designs (not necessarily great, but you put the effort in), the North Stars unique number font, and the fact that you didn't grab a template with the preset lines on them, and just use the paint bucket tool to fill the certain regions in with different colours.You have the creativity, now it's just a matter of honing your technical skills, and figuring out what works and what doesn't. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted March 1, 2004 Share Posted March 1, 2004 I know one team that has used upper & lower case on its uniforms...Northeasrtern University Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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