habsfan1 Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 Giving them a more decent look... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Throwback Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 It needs more yellow I think. ~?~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 Giving them a more decent look...I don't think so. These are very, very bland. Since it doesn't have a bright color in yellow or light blue, it just lacks pop. That, combined with a boring striping pattern that barely fills in any of the navy monotony, doesn't do it for me. Sorry. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 I have to agree that it lacks color and as elliott put it 'pop'. It is way too plain in my opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
siegel0572 Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 This sweater needs some work. First it needs some lighter colors in the striping, it is too dark as it is. I also think the striping needs to be changed, it is very plain. Also the red blocks on the bottom of the sleeves would not be seen on a body, they look like they would be under the armpits all the time. I think if you make a few changes you are on the right track. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
penguin20 Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 I agree that it lacks some pop, try using the waist striping on the arms and changing the jersey colour to the light blue. Also the underarm splotches are not really needed, overall it's a good direction but it needs some work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
habsfan1 Posted January 23, 2009 Author Share Posted January 23, 2009 Update:Here's something reminiscent to their original home jersey. I added more maroon so that it "pops" out more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 I think on both jerseys if you changed the maroon to light blue, they would look better. Leave the waste striping maroon, but the rest make light blue. That would certainly give it pop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 I think on both jerseys if you changed the maroon to light blue, they would look better. Leave the waste striping maroon, but the rest make light blue. That would certainly give it pop.Disagree, light blue is already unneeded, and the navy against maroon looks much classier, IMO. The update reminds me of the original dark sweater, obviously, and I think that's a good thing, it gets rid of the jagged striping on the ends and really looks nice. Good update. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
penguin20 Posted January 23, 2009 Share Posted January 23, 2009 The update is much nicer but I think that you should change the striping on the waist so that the maroon is beside the white-yellow striping the same way it is on the arms if you know what I mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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