NinthAfterNen Posted May 12, 2009 Share Posted May 12, 2009 Ooooh I like this style. I'm not sure about the wordmark not being arched, but to really judge it, I'd have to see it how it looks in action. And I like the idea of a white cap, but not in the 80s style with the front a different color from the back. If you are going to have a white cap, it should probably be mainly white, with a red bill and the traditional red A. The white A would probably work better on a completely red cap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshhockey Posted May 12, 2009 Author Share Posted May 12, 2009 Ooooh I like this style. I'm not sure about the wordmark not being arched, but to really judge it, I'd have to see it how it looks in action. And I like the idea of a white cap, but not in the 80s style with the front a different color from the back. If you are going to have a white cap, it should probably be mainly white, with a red bill and the traditional red A. The white A would probably work better on a completely red cap.That's the dilemma I had, if I was going to put the white A on a red cap then the outline would get lost and I wanted a mainly red hat and thought this style solved my problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NinthAfterNen Posted May 12, 2009 Share Posted May 12, 2009 Ooooh I like this style. I'm not sure about the wordmark not being arched, but to really judge it, I'd have to see it how it looks in action. And I like the idea of a white cap, but not in the 80s style with the front a different color from the back. If you are going to have a white cap, it should probably be mainly white, with a red bill and the traditional red A. The white A would probably work better on a completely red cap.That's the dilemma I had, if I was going to put the white A on a red cap then the outline would get lost and I wanted a mainly red hat and thought this style solved my problem.I'm not sure the outline is as necessary on a cap, but I can see how you'd want to do it the way you did it if you want to test out how the white A with the bevel looked. However, that style of cap is probably just a matter of different tastes. The only cap in that sort of style that I liked was the Expos' pinwheel caps. Apparently a lot of people like the blue and yellow brewer cap of the 80s, but it still seems iffy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted May 12, 2009 Share Posted May 12, 2009 The Angels is pretty good, however, it might be hard seeing a white wordmark on a white or gray background. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshhockey Posted May 13, 2009 Author Share Posted May 13, 2009 So there has been a change of plans. The Pirates will be next (you're welcome Chuck ), followed by the Marlins and then the Red Sox. Stay tuned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted May 14, 2009 Share Posted May 14, 2009 Looking forward to a Twins concept. https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshhockey Posted May 14, 2009 Author Share Posted May 14, 2009 Next in this series are the Pittsburgh Pirates. I went with something I haven't seen done before. Everyone takes the red away from the pirates and tries to just keep the colour scheme at black and yellow, but instead of doing that I took away red and added the Penguins' gold. I think it's pretty unique. C&C please.Home:Road:Home or Road Alternate: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted May 14, 2009 Share Posted May 14, 2009 Honestly there just isn't enough contrast between the gold and yellow. The vegas gold looks like an afterthought, like the gold they put around the World Series champion's numbers on the first game of the season. I can't even tell if you put it in the sleeve piping on the arms of the home/away, if so it blends way to much. The contrast between black and yellow is crucial to the pirates and I think the light gold just adds a distraction. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted May 15, 2009 Share Posted May 15, 2009 I don't know about this one, I really like the Pirates red as an accent color. I just don't think it feels like the Pirates without it. Also, I would love to see vests in Pittsburgh. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshhockey Posted May 15, 2009 Author Share Posted May 15, 2009 Thanks for the comments guys. I'll post updates after I finish all 30 original sets. Here's the Marlins' set. I feel it represents Florida well with the kind of unique-ness. C&C please.Home:Road:Alternate:Red Sox next. Then Twins and any requests. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshhockey Posted May 16, 2009 Author Share Posted May 16, 2009 I'm done the Red Sox set. No huge changes because, even though I hate them, it's a very classic look. I would like some more C&C on the Pirates and Marlins since I've only got 2 comments on the Pirates and none on the Marlins. Anyways, here's the Sox. Lots of C&C please.Home:Road:Alternate:Twins next. Taking requests. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bmac Posted May 16, 2009 Share Posted May 16, 2009 Pirates- I like the idea, but I don't really think it looks that great. Nice try though. Marlins- Very...interesting. I'm not too sure how that would work exactly, but good job. And good job on using more teal. Looks good. BoSox- Looks good. I'm not 100% sure about the red bills on everything, but it looks ok. Nice job. https://www.behance.net/bmatukewic8043 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RaiseTheBanner Posted May 16, 2009 Share Posted May 16, 2009 Well to tell you the truth I'm not really sure how that Marlins pinstriped set would fly... For the Red Sox, I pretty much like everything but the red bills, it's just not right. avatar by crkraider22, signature by crkraider22 and chestnutz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshhockey Posted May 18, 2009 Author Share Posted May 18, 2009 Bumping this back to the first page.I'd really like some more C&C on the last 3 sets. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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