rdsx246 Posted December 15, 2009 Share Posted December 15, 2009 It's getting pretty good, the first thing I think that need some work is the general shape of the head, which seems a bit too round for a hawk. Also, the eye shape is a little awkward looking IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Fixer Posted December 17, 2009 Author Share Posted December 17, 2009 k im pretty proud of this update. I think i finally got the head shape right. I reversed the shading, and tried to add some white in there.I gotta fix up the eye and refine all the shading lines and make it more smooth,and make the eye outlines bigger, but what do you think right now? and where can i put white in the beak? hmmmmmedit: i could make the head longer too maybe? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Fixer Posted December 18, 2009 Author Share Posted December 18, 2009 Bump? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rentz Posted December 18, 2009 Share Posted December 18, 2009 It's moving in the right direction. I would work on the eyes some more. The blank whiteness reminds me of batman. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Fixer Posted December 18, 2009 Author Share Posted December 18, 2009 I said I was gonna fill those in, in m post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rentz Posted December 18, 2009 Share Posted December 18, 2009 haha, woops. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Fixer Posted December 20, 2009 Author Share Posted December 20, 2009 think im finished unless someone has some more ideas. and i settled on green black and white.I liked the one with the wordmark for a helmet, like an LSU kinda thingill probably do uniforms lateri feel kinda bad though, because someone mentioned to me that it looks a lot like that one ravens logo, and i agree haha. but i didnt use any inspiration from that at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgthree Posted December 21, 2009 Share Posted December 21, 2009 it reminds me of pfeiffer, I don't get the beak/bill though. Is it open? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Fixer Posted December 22, 2009 Author Share Posted December 22, 2009 i dont know what a pfeiffer is? its open. i didnt mean to, but its shaded a lot like the ravens secondary logoi thought the progression was pretty cool and i spread the eyes out a little which i think is better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted December 22, 2009 Share Posted December 22, 2009 To me, I do not see an eagle... They are not that furry looking with random feathers everywhere.Eagles have a much more streamlined head Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Fixer Posted December 22, 2009 Author Share Posted December 22, 2009 What type of bird should it be then?Edit. Btw drink a cream soda while posting this. It's my Christmas sweet tradition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgthree Posted December 22, 2009 Share Posted December 22, 2009 Pfeiffer is a university in North Carolina.here is a small style guide: http://media.pfeiffer.edu/communications/and full PDF: http://www.pfeiffer.edu/images//pfeiffer%20style%20guide%206-12-09.pdf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikePho3niX Posted December 23, 2009 Share Posted December 23, 2009 Looks like a Raven. is the mouth open or closed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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