KCScout76 Posted January 13, 2010 Share Posted January 13, 2010 Jaha32,Your design has really come along well - it's good that you take advice from others and your concept is really quite nice. I really like the Red-Blk-Gold concept, however the Blue-Red is good also.Great job!!! Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021 St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL) 2023 Champions Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted January 16, 2010 Author Share Posted January 16, 2010 So this concepts is getting very close to done. I actually thought I was done but am having fun tweaking little things now. I couldnt work on it for a few days since I was busy but Im back at it with a new wordmark option. 1st Down actually helped me out by showing me some visuals of other types of fonts so thanks to him for that. I really didnt think anything was wrong with the lst font but I think he was right about it could be better and I hope this is. It's more messy but a nice change of pace from the typical blocky wordmarks. Thanks for all the feedback so far too.Do you guys think this new font is better compared to the verson I have on the right next to it? DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spammy Posted January 16, 2010 Share Posted January 16, 2010 Major improvement on the wordmark. I think this is your winner, good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
undead Posted January 16, 2010 Share Posted January 16, 2010 The new wordmark for sure. It's more aggressive and sharp like shark teeth. Very appropriate. I like the way you're developing the hell out of this concept. Portfoliobobschultz6' class="bbc_url">@bobschultz6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted January 16, 2010 Share Posted January 16, 2010 i agree. you gave this a less conservative look, and that fits the style of the sharkNow, only if you change the colors back to lightblue n orange Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted January 17, 2010 Author Share Posted January 17, 2010 Since adding that new wordmark I felt like it really opened up the posibilities for some secondaries. I wanted to do something with JAX since I know the 3 letter shortening of city names seems to be big right now, at least in the NBA. And I know there is no X is Jacksonville but that's how the Jaguars shorten it a lot, or at least used to. Im not sure about anymore. Also I felt that with the new wordmark that maybe some different colors would work. Ive never been so indecisive on colors before and I know some liked the red shark, some liked the original colors of orange and the blues, but I dont know I thought these word and hopefully I can stick with a color combo for once. lolI will do jerseys down the line but right now Im working on logos for teams. Then later I will work on jerseys and courts for these logos. although I have never designed jerseys before. Anyways heres the secondaries and everything. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bboy_555 Posted January 17, 2010 Share Posted January 17, 2010 Love this thread, the progression is incredible. Love the secondaries especially the JAX ones with fins.Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
naxxalenok Posted January 17, 2010 Share Posted January 17, 2010 great work. however, i would stick to the preivous colour scheme. to me, it's seems to be more unique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted January 17, 2010 Share Posted January 17, 2010 This color scheme you have now is perfect. That Jax with the fins logo looks rediculous, I love how far this series is going.Btw, if you need any assistance on the unis, you could always Pm me for help. (im a huge fan of jerseys) Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted January 17, 2010 Share Posted January 17, 2010 I think it's right where it needs to be. Great job on this set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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