CreamSoda Posted March 7, 2010 Share Posted March 7, 2010 Not really for a sports team, just a penguin graphic.Any suggestions? Thanks.quick update: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted March 7, 2010 Share Posted March 7, 2010 more white on the head. higher on the head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chapeeko Posted March 7, 2010 Share Posted March 7, 2010 Lose the smile go with an actual beak. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lights Out Posted March 7, 2010 Share Posted March 7, 2010 Is it supposed to be very cartoony? Because it achieves that effect really well right now. POTD: 2/4/12 3/4/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted March 7, 2010 Author Share Posted March 7, 2010 Is it supposed to be very cartoony? Because it achieves that effect really well right now.Yes, it is supposed to be a cartoon penguin. Should have said that on the OP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted March 7, 2010 Author Share Posted March 7, 2010 more white on the head. higher on the head.what do you mean by that exactly? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted March 7, 2010 Share Posted March 7, 2010 more white on the head. higher on the head.what do you mean by that exactly?google penguin images. you will notice that most penguins have some form of white near the top of the head, usually in a circular or curving motion- and higher on the head than you have displayed. it's not that i didn't see a penguin in your design, i just feel you could complete it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted March 7, 2010 Share Posted March 7, 2010 on second look, the eyes have a distinct shape as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rentz Posted March 7, 2010 Share Posted March 7, 2010 Eh, I don't know. The Emperor penguin which is probably the archetypal penguin has markings pretty similar to what he has, so if that was what he was going for it's pretty accurate.Anyway, the beak should probably be addressed-- the mouth makes it a bit of an anatomical impossibility, and while being cartoony is okay, the beak shape is realistic enough you might as well fix it. I also don't really like the eye, but I guess if you are going for cartoony it works. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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