Thunderfan23 Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 Is this better?The green on the 3rd is much better. But get rid of the blue under the arms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMW79 Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 These are almost done, but it looks like you were in a hurry or half asleep: Your shoulder logos are all over the place. The logo doesn't change depending on which shoulder it's on. That really needs to be fixed, and add shoulder patches on the back view of the thirds.Lose the blue underarms on the thirds. You should also add names to the backs.Add white numbers on the thirds.Lastly: These really are improving a lot--good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
letterform Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 The colours are so much better. DEATH TO REEBOK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMW79 Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 Also: The blue used for the logo on the road whites shouldn't be different from the blue used on the home and alts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julius Seizure Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 Love the number typeface! Different, but still simple Founder and Commissioner, World Gridiron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JackFr Posted March 29, 2010 Author Share Posted March 29, 2010 (Hopefully) final update. My NHL Rebrand BlogCheck it out and comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Has2916 Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 I may be too picky but there are a couple of very minor things you could fix.1.Blue jersey, end of the right arm, there's a renegade blue spot.2.Don't know if it matters to you, but the TM at the bottom of the logo shows as a blurred pixel on the coloured jerseys.3.The "A", "B" and "D" in the player's name on the back of the blue jersey has a different shade of blue in it.4.Seeing as you used the Buffalo 3rd template, the lines on the back of the blue jersey (just above the waist stripes) also contain a darker blue.5.There's a few renegade blue pixels at the bottom of your white jersey.Just a few things to clean it up a bit, if you care to? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMW79 Posted March 29, 2010 Share Posted March 29, 2010 The stick/rink logo is still upside down on the left (jersey's left; not viewing left) side of all six (front/back) jerseys. But good job fixing the right.Just to make it nicer, use a real name on the backs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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