chickenfish13 Posted May 4, 2010 Author Share Posted May 4, 2010 Bump dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Puck Posted May 5, 2010 Share Posted May 5, 2010 Just provide more concepts, less bumping. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted May 5, 2010 Author Share Posted May 5, 2010 I dont know if thats a shot at the fact I posted another concept while working on this ( its the internet I cant really tell ) but why'd you need to comment?I'd rather have you give me some feedback on the Bakersfield logos, even if the feedback is "they suck." dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
charger77 Posted May 5, 2010 Share Posted May 5, 2010 Really reminds me of: PotD May 11th, 2011looooooogodud: June 7th 2010 - July 5th 2012 Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Puck Posted May 5, 2010 Share Posted May 5, 2010 I dont know if thats a shot at the fact I posted another concept while working on this ( its the internet I cant really tell ) but why'd you need to comment?I'd rather have you give me some feedback on the Bakersfield logos, even if the feedback is "they suck."No, it's a shot in the fact you don't need to bump threads when you lack content. Just post content or let the thread slide down. That has been an argument of mine for awhile now, and it's a concept you can't seem to grasp. Post when you have something, simple as that.EDIT: And since you need Feedback:You never did fix the numbers on the Alaska JerseyYou've basically destroyed the Condors logo by oversimplifying it. It's just now a black and orange blur unless you're sitting at the distance between your monitor and your chair. Also, why couldn't the tape on the stick you know, look like tape on a stick rather than you trying to be cute and making it a W? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted May 5, 2010 Author Share Posted May 5, 2010 I posted 2 logos, no one commented, so I bumped it.. how is that a lack of content? I'm not going to post the whole league rebrand at once.Thanks for providing some feedback. I wasn't trying to be cute with the tape, just kind of stylize it a bit. But I can go back and try some other things with it. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shane Does Art Posted May 5, 2010 Share Posted May 5, 2010 I think the logo is looking good as it is right now, and I'd try and add a bit more detail to the head of the bird. It's looking good. Hi, how are you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted May 20, 2010 Author Share Posted May 20, 2010 OK, heres finally an update... Jersey Idea, looking for feedback. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted May 21, 2010 Share Posted May 21, 2010 Pretty nice, I think the condor needs some sort of text, though. The number font looks really sick, IMO, so try going with the same font. Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted May 23, 2010 Author Share Posted May 23, 2010 OK, updated the first Condors Jersey post with all 3 jerseys... C Jay, i tried some different text arrangements above, below the condor, but nothing looked very good. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oneblankcanvas Posted May 23, 2010 Share Posted May 23, 2010 I really like the Aces logo... Nice job on the type also. I'm wondering what you used for the font, do you start with a basic font in Illustrator and then start tweaking it by adding shapes and such?? I'd love to know what font that was, I have done a bit of design, but never many logos, so this is a new & fun experience for me to get into this new area of design! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Generic Posted May 23, 2010 Share Posted May 23, 2010 Nice work so far, I don't understand the gap on the back of the home and away making the Reebok logo obvious. Numbers look really good, logos look really good. The alt. logo is really unique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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