Pollock Creative Posted June 26, 2010 Share Posted June 26, 2010 I'm new here and have a great passion for logos. I was browsing around on the first page alone, and I saw two personal sports leagues. This inspired me to create my own. I need some help on some of the team names and colors. If you guys could please take the time to list changes or suggestions in your post it would be greatly appreciated and help me create a better identity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted June 26, 2010 Share Posted June 26, 2010 Nice looking graphic, hopefully the logos are done as well as this Welcome to the boards as well.I like the color schemes for many teams, mainly Miami, Minnesota, Carolina and Juneau. Sorry i dont really have any team name ideas. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chapeeko Posted June 26, 2010 Share Posted June 26, 2010 Dallas- Bandits, ArmadillosColorado- Rush, Rockies, CaratsChicago- Railers, Locomotives, Pigeons (lol)Houston- Pumas, BuzzardsDetroit- Mustangs, ChillPhilly- Freedom, CrowsWashington- Federals, Democracy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pollock Creative Posted June 26, 2010 Author Share Posted June 26, 2010 Thanks for the suggestions. I changed some names but I'll probably change a few down the road. First concept coming up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panchito Posted June 26, 2010 Share Posted June 26, 2010 Washington - Freedom Chicago - Skyscrapers Colorado - CoyotesHouston (or Texas) - Tarantulas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panchito Posted June 26, 2010 Share Posted June 26, 2010 one problem with "Houston Cougars" - the college that's in Houston already uses Cougars as their mascot/nickname Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gueman Posted June 26, 2010 Share Posted June 26, 2010 Baltimore Blast is the name of the existing and quite successful indoor soccer team. Baltimore Bombers, Baltimore Battles,and a play on words... the Baltimore Huns. With Hun being a play on the Bawlamarese word "hon". "Hon...The Universal Name...Like Sir, Ms...interchangeable with any name"-From the "Lexicon of Bawlamarese" Giving money and power to government is like giving whiskey and car keys to teenage boys. P. J. O'Rourke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pollock Creative Posted June 26, 2010 Author Share Posted June 26, 2010 Here is a quick update of the Bombers logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted June 26, 2010 Share Posted June 26, 2010 That looks great, excellent job. I think near the right corner of the mouth, the thick stroke should thin out a little bit more there. It looks kinda odd right now. Otherwise, it's perfect, very minor-league like. Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted June 26, 2010 Share Posted June 26, 2010 Only thing wrong is the stitching. Otherwise it's golden. Also, don't have the stitch cross onto the nose, there is a little yellow on the tip. @MichaelDanger19Â | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted June 26, 2010 Share Posted June 26, 2010 Nice to see a newcomer who takes time to create a presentable concept. The idea is cool, different.I like the facial definition, but I would maybe try and make it a bit more intimidating. The seam on the left looks kinda odd, I dont think its curving as much as it would. Nice start though, look forward to some updates, as well as just the whole series. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pollock Creative Posted June 26, 2010 Author Share Posted June 26, 2010 Thanks guys, I'll make those changes once I get back tonight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RamblinGamblinTiger Posted June 26, 2010 Share Posted June 26, 2010 The Cincinnati Cyclones already exist in the form of an ECHL team... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panchito Posted June 26, 2010 Share Posted June 26, 2010 I would change the stitching to make it look more like a baseball instead of a tennis ball, other than that it's good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OpaqueChicken Posted June 27, 2010 Share Posted June 27, 2010 Make the stitching lines look more natural and have them look like they would on a baseball.The perspective of thing by the explosion is off, but other then that your logo looks great. I AM SCORE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swe3t Posted June 27, 2010 Share Posted June 27, 2010 Naturaly, I cant wait for your Jacksonville concept.. It's going to be interesting to see how you do the snappin turtles logo with red, yellow, and orange.. I love the color combo, but the name may be hard.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
karmew32 Posted June 27, 2010 Share Posted June 27, 2010 New Orleans needs a team too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pollock Creative Posted June 27, 2010 Author Share Posted June 27, 2010 I updated the Bomber logo. I'm having a hard time getting the stitching right and thinking about ditching them. What do you guys think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gueman Posted June 27, 2010 Share Posted June 27, 2010 I would go with a different representation of a bomber. While your rendering of this is very good, for some reason it looks like a smiling fruit to me. Perhaps a WW2 bomber (the connection to Baltimore Bombers was that WW2 bombers were made there) or a WW2 aerial bomb. Another connection to Baltimore Bombers would be the line from the National Anthem. "Bombs bursting in air" but I am not sure how you would make that into a logo. But I am looking forward to seeing how this and the others progress. Giving money and power to government is like giving whiskey and car keys to teenage boys. P. J. O'Rourke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pollock Creative Posted June 27, 2010 Author Share Posted June 27, 2010 I would go with a different representation of a bomber. While your rendering of this is very good, for some reason it looks like a smiling fruit to me. Perhaps a WW2 bomber (the connection to Baltimore Bombers was that WW2 bombers were made there) or a WW2 aerial bomb. Another connection to Baltimore Bombers would be the line from the National Anthem. "Bombs bursting in air" but I am not sure how you would make that into a logo. But I am looking forward to seeing how this and the others progress.I'm saving a stealth bomber logo for the St. Louis Stealth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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