raysox Posted December 19, 2010 Share Posted December 19, 2010 EDIT: I totally posted this in concepts. Move please? D:Hello.So ChuckDownfield and I are good friends, and we both are playing lacrosse this year. We're on two different teams though. He's playing for his school, and I'm playing for mine. His team isn't using the school's mascot, a Falcon. The teams are actually club teams, and in no way are connected to the school. But, every player from that team goes to the school, and often take the name. My team for example, is the same. So he asked if I wanted to do him a logo, and I obviously said yes. I actually drew up this logo two days before, but didn't use it. It fit so perfectly. So what I have is a Coyote howling, which I did not try to resemble to the hockey team. I need some tips and pointers on how to make it fiercer.C&C @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TornadoGTS Posted December 19, 2010 Share Posted December 19, 2010 Im not gonna lie, it looks like it has its head tilted back, laughing joyfully.On a sidenote, as for the name, after hearing/seeing Dunedin Falcons for years, Coyotes just sounds odd to me personally LOL. Facebook: CustomSportsCovers Twitter: CSCovers Quote No because when the Irish came to Ireland and first came in contact with the leprechaun people, they didn't take their land away and force them to move west. Instead, the two groups learned to assimilate peacefully. However, certain tribes of the leprechaun refused to taint the pure blood and moved north into the forests of Ireland, only to be seen rarely, usually at the same time of a rainbows appearance and occasionally at the factories of Lucky Charms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CS85 Posted December 19, 2010 Share Posted December 19, 2010 need to shorten the jaw, this is the jay leno of coyotes. Quote "You are nothing more than a small cancer on this message board. You are not entertaining, you are a complete joke." twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HarperK Posted December 19, 2010 Share Posted December 19, 2010 the Japanese Laughing Coyotes? Good start though to be honest... ʎɐqǝ uo pɹɐoqʎǝʞ ɐ ʎnq ı ǝɯıʇ ʇsɐן ǝɥʇ sı sıɥʇ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted December 22, 2010 Author Share Posted December 22, 2010 the Japanese Laughing Coyotes? Good start though to be honest...Honestly, to me, it looks like it was getting head.Update, i traced a picture instead of going from a sketch. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted December 29, 2010 Author Share Posted December 29, 2010 Bump.Chuckdownfield wanted teeth, and i changed the wordmark. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lancebridwell Posted December 29, 2010 Share Posted December 29, 2010 Try to make the jaw bone form an actual jaw bone, it looks as of now like he's got a bunch of fat hanging off his neck. And possibly try repositioning the teeth, it looks like s hillbilly coyote with the two teeth just protruding out of nowhere, and I think it would like better if the teeth just weren't there. Also, the squinted eye just doesn't look right, IMO.Think of this as reference. I don't think, because thinking implies uncertainty. Therefore, I KNOW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysox Posted December 29, 2010 Author Share Posted December 29, 2010 Try to make the jaw bone form an actual jaw bone, it looks as of now like he's got a bunch of fat hanging off his neck. And possibly try repositioning the teeth, it looks like s hillbilly coyote with the two teeth just protruding out of nowhere, and I think it would like better if the teeth just weren't there. Also, the squinted eye just doesn't look right, IMO.Think of this as reference.lol, i did trace that image. What do you mean by the jaw? just make it more angled and not as round? But I'll ask what ChuckDownfield wants for an update. @MichaelDanger19 | Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted December 30, 2010 Share Posted December 30, 2010 I'd say tilt the head more sideways. Right now it is facing straight up, which I know coyotes do, but it just seems too extreme. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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