rtrich11 Posted June 24, 2013 Share Posted June 24, 2013 Back in 2005 I did a logo for a school out in Pennsylvania, got a little payment, but then after a while didn't think about. I did a Google search to find they are still using it prominently on their hockey jerseys, which is pretty cool. They don't use it for other sports that I could confirm. In the 2005 image you can see it, albeit small, on jerseys, and even some t-shirts.While I am ok with that logo, there are parts of it that always bothered me. I also always wanted to "toughen" it or at least give it a sleeker look. The bottom picture is what I came up with as a result. The difference in the faces are very radical, but don't let that mix you up. The first logo has both eyes kind of forced on there, while the update puts the right eye where it should be. The eye on the right then wouldn't be seen. I also darkened the blue... just because I wanted to. The new logo works in other color combos, too. 20052013 cafepress.com/artbyrichards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tigerslionspistonshabs Posted June 24, 2013 Share Posted June 24, 2013 Nice update, but I would definitely give the eyes pupils. They would make the Ram appear more aggressive IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted June 24, 2013 Share Posted June 24, 2013 For some reason I do not like the red stripe down the middle of the new one the old one looks much better seems more defined the pupil I think will help other than that solid update. My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCRGraphix Posted June 24, 2013 Share Posted June 24, 2013 This is a good update. He looks less cartoony now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OliverP Posted June 25, 2013 Share Posted June 25, 2013 For some reason i think that the updated ram look more wild and threatening without the pupils. very good update, always liked simpler logos Dribbble Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted June 25, 2013 Share Posted June 25, 2013 very cool man, and much better. as much as i love the "demon ram" look, its probably going to be a bit more appropriate with pupils. it dosent have to be very detailed, just put a circle in the eye. and, i probably say this to everyone, but thicken that outer key stroke or lose it. you want it to be bold, and powerful looking, not wimpy, girly trim. GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rtrich11 Posted June 26, 2013 Author Share Posted June 26, 2013 Thanks, guys. I made a change to the width of the ram, which gives it a beefier presence. I haven't worked out the eye just yet, but as you can see, it's in progress. Brandon, I do actually agree with you on the outline stroke. It's thin because of the darker colors. I'm trying to keep the wordmark from looking like a blob from any distance. A lighter color, like shown in the inset, can allow you a thicker line. Heck, it's a concept, so I suppose I can do both ways. cafepress.com/artbyrichards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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