YelichGraphics Posted January 7, 2014 Share Posted January 7, 2014 one half one color the other half another colorone wordUGLY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
farmkid98 Posted January 7, 2014 Author Share Posted January 7, 2014 any better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted January 8, 2014 Share Posted January 8, 2014 love it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhioSportsMan61 Posted January 8, 2014 Share Posted January 8, 2014 Couple things on your Ducks concept to make it more presentable. The crest/number/name are all too low (and the crest is a little too big). Try making the gear not the center of attention, rather the jersey the main focus. And to make it less pixelated, save your final image as a .png My Behance Portfolio ---Â Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
farmkid98 Posted January 9, 2014 Author Share Posted January 9, 2014 Couple things on your Ducks concept to make it more presentable. The crest/number/name are all too low (and the crest is a little too big). Try making the gear not the center of attention, rather the jersey the main focus. And to make it less pixelated, save your final image as a .pngWill work on that. I accidentally saved it as a jpeg and noticed it after I had already closed out of the program. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
farmkid98 Posted January 19, 2014 Author Share Posted January 19, 2014 Here's the Ducks. Sorry it took so long. Been caught up in school work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
farmkid98 Posted January 25, 2014 Author Share Posted January 25, 2014 Here's the Sharks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted January 26, 2014 Share Posted January 26, 2014 I love it. thought people hate the orange but, I think the orange looks great on those unis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
farmkid98 Posted January 29, 2014 Author Share Posted January 29, 2014 Capitals Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake88 Posted January 29, 2014 Share Posted January 29, 2014 Whoa those stars on the arms are HUGE. Same with the logos. The socks need real striping and glove would look horrible in real life. I hate to be that guy, but NHL rules require TV numbers and the should be on your concepts anyway. I updated my helmet and glove template to be smaller so if you'd like that, message me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted January 29, 2014 Share Posted January 29, 2014 Just a small gripe for the Jackets, Dubinsky isn't 18 that's Umberger. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted January 29, 2014 Share Posted January 29, 2014 A lot of these ideas are actually pretty good, man. Your execution isn't the best, but keep working because these are really solid ideas. I won't comment on all of them but two that really stood out to me were the very first Avalanche one you posted and this Caps one you just posted. Normally, I hate wordmarks on hockey sweaters, but for some reason the "Avalanche" combined with the yeti foot really worked for me. There are some slight issues with the wordmark being a tad too big and in so the logo was pushed down too close to the hem stripes. Speaking of which, there needs to be a little bit of uniformity between the hem and sleeve stripes. They don't need to be identical but right now you've got modern sleeve stripes with retro hem stripes and it clashes. The Capitals one is pretty good too. Again, for some reason the wordmark works here (probably because it's part of the logo). Also, as in your Avs concept, the logo is a little too big; I'd shrink it a bit.I've noticed too that the quality of your logos are a bit pixelated. You may want to work on that too. May I suggest downloading Paint.NET? I literally recommend it to all Paint users (and I'm sorry if you're not using Paint, I'm just assuming you are). Anyway, it's a free program very similar to Paint, making it relatively easy to use, and it produces much better results.I like some of the stuff I'm seeing; it's very out-of-the-box, I'm glad you're not posting a bunch of bland concepts that many (including myself) are guilty of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake88 Posted January 30, 2014 Share Posted January 30, 2014 A lot of these ideas are actually pretty good, man. Your execution isn't the best, but keep working because these are really solid ideas. I won't comment on all of them but two that really stood out to me were the very first Avalanche one you posted and this Caps one you just posted. Normally, I hate wordmarks on hockey sweaters, but for some reason the "Avalanche" combined with the yeti foot really worked for me. There are some slight issues with the wordmark being a tad too big and in so the logo was pushed down too close to the hem stripes. Speaking of which, there needs to be a little bit of uniformity between the hem and sleeve stripes. They don't need to be identical but right now you've got modern sleeve stripes with retro hem stripes and it clashes. The Capitals one is pretty good too. Again, for some reason the wordmark works here (probably because it's part of the logo). Also, as in your Avs concept, the logo is a little too big; I'd shrink it a bit.I've noticed too that the quality of your logos are a bit pixelated. You may want to work on that too. May I suggest downloading Paint.NET? I literally recommend it to all Paint users (and I'm sorry if you're not using Paint, I'm just assuming you are). Anyway, it's a free program very similar to Paint, making it relatively easy to use, and it produces much better results.I like some of the stuff I'm seeing; it's very out-of-the-box, I'm glad you're not posting a bunch of bland concepts that many (including myself) are guilty of. Yeah I use Paint.net too, and it truly helps the execution of any concept. Since I suppose you got my template off of HJC (I really don't know where else you'd get it, really) check out Ryan's PDN tutorial. It's a good way to learn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ujju2 Posted January 30, 2014 Share Posted January 30, 2014 Love most of these! I agree, execution could improve, but great ideas. Nice work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
farmkid98 Posted January 31, 2014 Author Share Posted January 31, 2014 Working on the Caps. In the meantime, here's the Blues. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ujju2 Posted January 31, 2014 Share Posted January 31, 2014 Lovin' the Blues! Perfect logo on a phenomenal jersey! Totally creative, Great Work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrWonka Posted January 31, 2014 Share Posted January 31, 2014 A lot of these are close to being good. There are some good ideas, but it seems like your going WAY too out of the box. Being original is one thing, but some of these I think just can't work. Like for some you have some decent arm stripes and designs, but then the hem striping is completely different. The jerseys I feel are missing a huge factor to me, and that is looking unified. It looks like some of these have 3 different jersey styles into one. It just looks cluttered and crazy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted January 31, 2014 Share Posted January 31, 2014 An okay attempt at the Blues. I think you have a lot of elements that are clashing here. Also, this is a small gripe I guess, the Blues' third jersey should be navy since their primary home is just regular blue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
farmkid98 Posted February 1, 2014 Author Share Posted February 1, 2014 Made some changes to the stars, added sleeve #'s, and some other details. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
farmkid98 Posted February 1, 2014 Author Share Posted February 1, 2014 Made some changes to the Blues as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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