LeeTraylor Posted June 20, 2014 Author Share Posted June 20, 2014 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRicSlick Posted June 20, 2014 Share Posted June 20, 2014 The Hammerhead looks a little too realistic, i'd say lose some lines, and make it more of a "logo". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walkerws Posted June 20, 2014 Share Posted June 20, 2014 I agree. Also clean up the numbers. The font is not a good idea. A jagged font with cuts or edges is fine but needs to be even from top to bottom and left to right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted June 20, 2014 Share Posted June 20, 2014 Your placing for the logo on that LA helmet is terrible. the holes destroy almost all of the shark's face. The logo is too detailed as said above. The red is also way too bright and hurts to look at actually. Hammerheads also aren't very common near LA... they're more common in warmer water, and it's too cold out here. It'd be more regionally appropriate if you went with a different animal, though that's not a huge deal. laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AreteisMotto Posted June 20, 2014 Share Posted June 20, 2014 How many Lions and Bears roam freely in Detroit and Chicago respectfully? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted June 21, 2014 Share Posted June 21, 2014 I love it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrano123 Posted June 21, 2014 Share Posted June 21, 2014 I think that taking the image from a realistic image to something like a logo is a good idea as well. Try shrinking that shark on the helmet too. I think you did really well with the number font selection as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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