mattb6 Posted June 10, 2014 Share Posted June 10, 2014 Havana is just bad. The colors are way too bright and would look terrible on the field. The logos are pretty good especially the wordmark, but you definitely need to darken the green, ditch the pink, and darken the blue. The jerseys look to similar to the Rattlers on the shoulders and the design itself is pretty dull. Keep the logo and wordmark, otherwise ditch almost everything else, because its not working. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrano123 Posted June 10, 2014 Share Posted June 10, 2014 The crocs eye looks a little funky to me. Maybe try to harsher that up as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wonderbread Posted June 10, 2014 Share Posted June 10, 2014 Wow, so much neon, and their is no logic behind where you put colors on each jersey, looks like you you just went and put colors and different spaces just because with no rhyme or reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
michigan97 Posted June 16, 2014 Share Posted June 16, 2014 Use more detail in your logos, would make teams look 10 times bettter. http://oi58.tinypic.com/34g9ez4.jpghttp://oi39.tinypic.com/6f9yyh.jpghttp://oi43.tinypic.com/v4qa03.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Orange Crush Posted June 16, 2014 Share Posted June 16, 2014 Substituting Toronto for Windsor. Havana:Despite all the hate. i actually like these uniforms. Would be love to see them 'in action.' They remind me a lot of the old Orlando Thunder jerseys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted June 16, 2014 Share Posted June 16, 2014 how about making the gater with a gater skin texture Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOppenheimer Posted June 16, 2014 Share Posted June 16, 2014 how about making the gater with a gater skin textureIt's a crocodile. And gator is spelled with an o. Noah Oppenheimerbaseballonly on OOTP ForumsPhillies GM in Max Modern BaseballMMB Phillies Blog--League BlogIronPigs GM in Continental Baseball League Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted June 17, 2014 Share Posted June 17, 2014 Use more detail in your logos, would make teams look 10 times bettter.What? Huh? I feel there's too much detail in the Crocodile logo. Agree a full bodied snake logo showing the rattler would be better for San Antonio though. And darken at least one of the colors on Havana. Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buster Posted June 17, 2014 Share Posted June 17, 2014 Substituting Toronto for Windsor. Havana:I see the inspiration. The croc just needs a hat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRicSlick Posted June 17, 2014 Share Posted June 17, 2014 Substituting Toronto for Windsor. Havana:I see the inspiration. The croc just needs a hat.And yellower teeth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted June 17, 2014 Share Posted June 17, 2014 Colors too bright. I would call them the crocs istead of the crocodiles. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mikey_Meatballs Posted June 18, 2014 Share Posted June 18, 2014 I love the San Antonio logo and uniform, the helmet is sick!Havana is a fun concept for a franchise, however the colors are way too 1987 neon. I feel like the uniforms would need batteries.Would it look better if the purple was replaced with yellow/gold? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pengin. Posted June 18, 2014 Share Posted June 18, 2014 Rattlers: The logo is fantastic. I love the organic shape it depicts, but it's not really visible on a helmet. I think you make need to tweak the coloring a bit to make it stand out more. I don't really like the rest of the brand because the wordmark, typography, and colors don't really mesh well with the logo. Like I said before, the logo is organic and really snake like, but you contrast that significantly with the block text. Though, I do appreciate you customizing the wordmark with the fang like details.Crocodiles: Whoa, my eyes. Love the wordmark. I love how Havana seems to be hovering above the water creating a ripple. But the rest of the brand needs work. I love the coloring, but I don't think it would translate well on the field without making them look like clowns and it doesn't scream crocodiles to me. It screams Miami Vice or the EDM scene. The numbering doesn't suit the name crocodiles, but I think its just the colors that is off putting. Work on the coloring and I think you have a winner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PSUcelticsWON95 Posted June 18, 2014 Share Posted June 18, 2014 Despite everyone disliking the colors, I think with it being a D-league team, it would be okay. A little identity never hurt anyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Whittier S Posted June 19, 2014 Share Posted June 19, 2014 Much improved. When developing a palette, you don't want all your colours to be the same brightness/saturation/etc, which was the trouble with the original palette. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidellias Posted June 20, 2014 Share Posted June 20, 2014 Personally you're moving in the right direction, but I think you need to darken the green a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nuordr Posted June 20, 2014 Share Posted June 20, 2014 Didn't you know the SEC is the development league for the NFL? That green and blue for Havana is a little to bright for my taste, maybe tone them down some? **Update** The black tones down the whole look and it now looks better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1clkgtramg Posted June 20, 2014 Share Posted June 20, 2014 Its like everyone here has forgotten that WFL and NFL Europe ever happened. Not to mention the CFL exists too. I'd say London, Ontario would have to be the best choice in that area as its the largest city still without a team. But If you are hellbent on a Toronto team, pick Mississauga. The Havana team is still too bright for me but since its developmental, I guess anything goes. Didn't know there were Crocodiles there either. I feel the rattlers need more colours but the helmet logo is quite interesting. US and World License Plate Redesign - Fixing the Elite Ice Hockey League - NHL to Soccer Crossover - European Hockey League Twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeTraylor Posted June 20, 2014 Author Share Posted June 20, 2014 The Cuban Crocodile. And I just got finished with my NFL Europe re-design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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