TBGKon Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 REALLY good start man. Love the idea. I like the addition of white very much.Only advice? The bend of his "torso" is a little severe. I'd like to see a little more flow. ALso, Nurse sharks are pretty docile but have wicked looking, overlapping, croc-style teeth. Lets get some of those bad boys in here.I really like it though. Nice. as far as the bend is concerned, i tried to make it seem as tho we were viewing the shark from below - not sure if i accomplished that, but hence the bend.i tried to do some of those teeth, i used many photos as references, but i couldnt make it work without losing the overall feel of the design.suggestions for the alternate logo? a dorsal fin alt logo would be cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted August 31, 2005 Author Share Posted August 31, 2005 i thought of doing a dorsal fin, but i thought it would be too cliche, and i'd make it look too much like the San Jose Sharks alt logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TBGKon Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 i thought of doing a dorsal fin, but i thought it would be too cliche, and i'd make it look too much like the San Jose Sharks alt logo oh ok, do whatever, not a problem with me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted August 31, 2005 Author Share Posted August 31, 2005 last thing before i leave for work - do you like the buoy alt logo? i was planning on doing a tertiary logo with the letters TB with a baseball bitten out of it, and then an inaugural season logo with a dorsal fin. i didnt find the thread with the league logo, so if you could post that here, id appreciate it. i plan on tweaking the buoy logo and should have that posted tonite. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BuddyLane Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 Gordie, the secondary logo is as good as the first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TBGKon Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 last thing before i leave for work - do you like the buoy alt logo? i was planning on doing a tertiary logo with the letters TB with a baseball bitten out of it, and then an inaugural season logo with a dorsal fin. i didnt find the thread with the league logo, so if you could post that here, id appreciate it. i plan on tweaking the buoy logo and should have that posted tonite. I Pm'd you the league logo, buoy alt is great. The TB logo can be a BP logo. Inaugural season logo sounds cool too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sterling84 Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 as far as the bend is concerned, i tried to make it seem as tho we were viewing the shark from below - not sure if i accomplished that, but hence the bend.i tried to do some of those teeth, i used many photos as references, but i couldnt make it work without losing the overall feel of the design.Umm. Depicting the head from the side doesn't help it look like our perspective is from below at all. And I know the curve is important. What I'm saying is that fish do not fold. They bend to a degree, but it's very uniform and fluid.Also, I'm not sure what you mean about the teeth......but I'll take your word for it. The Official Cheese-Filled Snack of NASCAR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted August 31, 2005 Share Posted August 31, 2005 That tail is huge....disproportionate? oh crap bad spelling....you get the drift. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wheateater Posted September 1, 2005 Share Posted September 1, 2005 Anybody else seeing a face in the wave there? It looks kinda stoned, but to me, there appears to be a pair of eyes with a flat nose and mouth in the wave. The two highest/pointiest points in the wave are the eyes......weird. But that's beside the point. ANYWAY......This is a great alt logo, though I do believe the wave could use some more green (?) rather than simply being white and tan. Also, as mentioned earlier, the bite in the buoy could use some extra definition.All-in-all, this is a terrific logo (and I wouldn't mind having you design an alt logo for my WAmFL team ). Keep up the great work! Wagner Athletic Group11-2 Saskatoon Steeds (WAFL)-NFL-2014 Western Conference Champions / 8-5 Calgary Pronghorns (TNFF)-CFL-2014 Confederation Cup XI Champions14-6-2 Saskatoon Yellowheads (XHL)-NHL-1st, Gretzky Conference / 5-4-0 Saskatoon Czars (MLH)-AHL-T2nd, Calder Conference7-1-6 VfL Dortmund (Weltliga)-Bundesliga-3rd, League / 5-1-5 West End AFC (WFL)-EPL-T5th, League14-7 Saskatoon Sheiks (AA)-MLB-2014 Founder's Cup Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted September 1, 2005 Author Share Posted September 1, 2005 here's an updated version of the alt logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted September 1, 2005 Author Share Posted September 1, 2005 here's the new BP logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quantum Posted September 1, 2005 Share Posted September 1, 2005 I think the bitemark needs tweaking. It should be biting out of the green as well. "One of my concerns is shysters show up and take advantage of people's good will and generosity". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted September 1, 2005 Author Share Posted September 1, 2005 I think the bitemark needs tweaking. It should be biting out of the green as well. im not sure i know exactly what you mean - could you elaborate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quantum Posted September 1, 2005 Share Posted September 1, 2005 I think the bitemark needs tweaking. It should be biting out of the green as well. im not sure i know exactly what you mean - could you elaborate? The green is rounded by the bitemark. I think the green should be rendered similarly with a bite mark for realism. "One of my concerns is shysters show up and take advantage of people's good will and generosity". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted September 1, 2005 Author Share Posted September 1, 2005 here are the uniforms i've done - any changes you want made, let me know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oakland ehs Posted September 1, 2005 Share Posted September 1, 2005 i think you should move the shark logo to the sleeve, and then the BP logo to all the hats.i think you're trying to stay away from the current devil rays with the TB hat but I think it'd look better that way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TBGKon Posted September 1, 2005 Share Posted September 1, 2005 i think you should move the shark logo to the sleeve, and then the BP logo to all the hats.i think you're trying to stay away from the current devil rays with the TB hat but I think it'd look better that way. I actually like the shark on the cap, it reminds me of my favorite minor league team, the Clearwater ThreshersGordie...can you make a home jersey that is not a vest and off-white, just so I can see what it looks like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BallWonk Posted September 1, 2005 Share Posted September 1, 2005 here are the uniforms i've done - any changes you want made, let me knowJust for input, that is a sweet logo and unifom set you've created. I love the alt, too. Very creative and sharply executed.One suggestion, though: the shark doesn't stand out from the cap enough for my taste. You might want to try a white outline to see how that looks, and whether it helps the shark jump off the cap a bit more. But man, that's a great uniform set. Here's hoping the Devil Rays get in touch with you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TBGKon Posted September 1, 2005 Share Posted September 1, 2005 here are the uniforms i've done - any changes you want made, let me knowJust for input, that is a sweet logo and unifom set you've created. I love the alt, too. Very creative and sharply executed.One suggestion, though: the shark doesn't stand out from the cap enough for my taste. You might want to try a white outline to see how that looks, and whether it helps the shark jump off the cap a bit more. But man, that's a great uniform set. Here's hoping the Devil Rays get in touch with you! i agree with the outline on the cap logo, it does seem to get lost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted September 1, 2005 Author Share Posted September 1, 2005 i thought that too. i will go ahead and make the hats with a white outline around the shark, add the buoy logo as a sleeve patch, and make another home uniform with full sleeves and off white. coming right up! *rings bell, hands order to cook*by the way, today officially marks one full year of my being a member of the boards. yay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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