j'villejags

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  1. I think their helmet stripes are supposed to give that effect but your idea looks better.
  2. I prefer the gloss black to these. Maybe instead of teal flake, we could get some sublimated jaguar print? Or is it too 'Joe Exotic'? Going foing for this effect.
  3. It took me way longer than I care to admit to realize what you changed here.
  4. A gloss or metallic powder helmet might work, but matte powder looks awful.
  5. Oddly enough, my brother actually has this. I can ask him what color he sees when he sees their powder blue.
  6. We still want the pictures! Show us what you had.
  7. Wow! Beautiful work, as always. I think the strength/aggression of a ram is missing from what they came up with, and it works really well here. Looking forward to seeing the finished product. You can make out the top of a stylized A from the eye. Adding LA in the ram head would probably feel forced, but it would be interesting to have a secondary 'LA' logo using this styling to pair with the ram head.
  8. The backwards helmet decals were a nice touch.
  9. With the comment on simplifying and evolving, I don't expect to see them on there. Especially after removing navy from the palette. Powder or gold numbers on a white helmet at that scale would not be all that legible from a discernible distance.
  10. Man, Photobucket blurring this is such a tease. EDIT: I tried opening the image in a new tab and it cleared up for me -- didn't know you could do that. @Buc I rehosted it on Imgur in case it is showing up blurry for anyone else. Great work, by the way!
  11. The numbers are giving me metallic or even chrome vibes. Makes me wonder if there will be a unique finish on the helmets.
  12. With the lines and colors used, it looks like the horn is protruding out of its eye.
  13. It looks like something they threw in for the emoji-commenting crowd on social media.
  14. Going back to your main question on the eye -- I really like the line above the eye on option 2, as it accentuates the aggressive brow. The overall shape of the shadow and the lower portion of option 1 seem to work better for the space. If you combine the best of both, I think it'd look great. Essentially, use the eye from option 1, but add the brow line on the top from option 2.
  15. If you prefer the wider orientation, I'd try to give him a more stoic look -- especially around the mouth.
  16. I like it! This is very nice! Agree with @BVZ that the mouth needs some work. If I'm being honest, the negative space there looks a bit phallic. The ram horns feel a little flat and elongated on the top as well. I'd try rounding the top of the horns while thinking of how that shape would look on the helmet. The face looks like it is charging but rams will tuck their chins down to absorb impact when they are butting heads. I'd rotate the logo clockwise so that the stance matches that aggressive expression. Overall, great job!
  17. The white/yellow gradient reminds me of ‘yellow snow’ for some reason.
  18. That would certainly look better. The gradient feels like something the designer and organization compromised on.