Frenchie Posted January 8, 2015 Share Posted January 8, 2015 As a Fins' fan and someone who likes "liberal/Modern" concepts, I love that last helmet.I like the colour choice for the shirt, but get working on the numbers.Look at hundreds of existing teams, this one looks like an Old Navy "collegiate collection" t-shirts. @Frenchie_TO Owner of the Rochester Americans of the MLH Owner of the Toronto Frenchies of the GCFHL6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbb Posted January 8, 2015 Author Share Posted January 8, 2015 l removed the word mark and l made some little improvements Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbb Posted January 8, 2015 Author Share Posted January 8, 2015 Or maybe it's better orange as main color? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AntCurtain Posted January 9, 2015 Share Posted January 9, 2015 I love that white helmet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted January 9, 2015 Share Posted January 9, 2015 i like the white helmet. just change the face mask color Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrAstrodome Posted January 9, 2015 Share Posted January 9, 2015 Another thing with the numbers is that the main chest and back numbers are stretched, giving them an uneven look to them. You could put the back normal proportions like you have on the shoulders, they would look better. As for the helmet, the white one is the best.  All New: NFL RandomWebsite ★ Behance ★ Twitter ★ Geekier Twitter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbb Posted January 9, 2015 Author Share Posted January 9, 2015 i like the white helmet. just change the face mask colorA white or an aqua one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbb Posted January 9, 2015 Author Share Posted January 9, 2015 New helmet and new numbers font Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
martymcfry Posted January 9, 2015 Share Posted January 9, 2015 Oh no the number font is terrible. Do an NFL Varsity Block, that is awful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted January 9, 2015 Share Posted January 9, 2015 change the font to a normal one and it makes that uniform a very good one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbb Posted January 10, 2015 Author Share Posted January 10, 2015 New font!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
worcat Posted January 10, 2015 Share Posted January 10, 2015 100x better.. Bleeding Blue since 1986 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted January 10, 2015 Share Posted January 10, 2015 It's been great to see this concept evolve. The number font was just what you need (though I'm not sold on the name font). Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dakotapalm Posted January 11, 2015 Share Posted January 11, 2015 It's been great to see this concept evolve. The number font was just what you need (though I'm not sold on the name font).Totally agree. This was struggling at the beginning, but you had good ideas.To add to it, people gave constructive criticism, and you came back with improvements. Nice job with this. http://www.dakotapalmhelmets.blogspot.com    Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordyhazy Posted January 11, 2015 Share Posted January 11, 2015 Looks good but don't like the white lines but hey other than that it's pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
worcat Posted January 11, 2015 Share Posted January 11, 2015 Instead of the solid orange arm stripe, would you consider trying the main logo's sun outline?Also, I feel like the name plate needs to be something standard and basic. Bleeding Blue since 1986 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbb Posted January 11, 2015 Author Share Posted January 11, 2015 Away uniform Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
worcat Posted January 11, 2015 Share Posted January 11, 2015 Dolphin logo on the jersey and pants is redundant. Keep the logo on the pants, place a font logo under the collar. Change player name font....pleaseWith the wasted space on the helmet, you COULD attempt to add helmet numbers and use the jersey's shoulder area for logo's. It may not be traditional but it could work. Bleeding Blue since 1986 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
martymcfry Posted January 11, 2015 Share Posted January 11, 2015 Dolphin logo on the jersey and pants is redundant. Keep the logo on the pants, place a font logo under the collar. Change player name font....pleaseWith the wasted space on the helmet, you COULD attempt to add helmet numbers and use the jersey's shoulder area for logo's. It may not be traditional but it could work. I don't think anyone needs to worry about this concept being traditional. I think this is more of a Pro Combat then it will be regular uniforms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
worcat Posted January 11, 2015 Share Posted January 11, 2015 Just saying my idea was not traditional and it may be out of the norm to follow what i suggested. Bleeding Blue since 1986 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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